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11 Public Reviews Given
13 Total Reviews Given
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Review by possess_manes
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
Why is the language not English?
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Review of soul body swap  
Review by possess_manes
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
Grammars, spellings, plot structure. All of it failed.
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Review of Possession Goo  
Review by possess_manes
Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
Why no male possession? This is 2016 Bro.
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Review of Trading post  
Review by possess_manes
Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
Lots and lots of grammar mistakes. Are you even trying? Try to understand and fix it. That way, your item can be more pleasing.
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Review of Body Port  
Review by possess_manes
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
You are just copy pasting the chapters. No variance whatsoever. Also, why are there no male child. I want to add a chapter but I feel unobliged because of what you done to the story. It has a great concept but worse execution.
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Review by possess_manes
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
wow this story good i rate it 5.
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