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Review of No Ho Ho Here  
Review by SRRizzotto
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was spectacular. what a great way to put a twist on voting and a great way to look at what a candidate will do and or say to get your vote. I really enjoyed the "Monkey see, Monkey do" bit and stopped for a moment to think how true it is. I will say though my favorite part of the story and the part that stuck out the most to me was the "spider" in the beard.

I think far to often do we as a society look at things, or at least want to look at things for the good as a whole without taking the time to really look at the picture as a whole. Great visual on this story and keep up the good work.
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Review by SRRizzotto
Rated: 13+ | (1.5)
YIKES!!!

I have to say this poem started out in the right direction but it seems that as it progressed there was a lot of anger and hate mixed up in it and I was not sure what the author was "really" saying. There were some good critical points in it but I was rather disgusted at the whole American Flag bit at the bottom of the page.

Our flag should NEVER in any context be used or directed to represent anything that has to do with "Nazi" anything.

Our flag represents freedom, its stars - our states, and such. The flag represents the blood that was shed for our country, within our country. Has the "Administration" failed? I would say yes but remember that is only them, it is not us, we the people for the people.

Taking something even as little or as large as it may be and turning it as opposed to those who have cause the issues and making them a joke should NEVER be. That is why I have rated this poem what it is.

It was good up and until I saw what was done with MY flag.
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Review of Thank You  
Review by SRRizzotto
Rated: E | (5.0)
First off I would like to say thank you to you for writing this. It is not often that people really open up and share what they are thinking in the form of a thank you letter. I have not ever met you and can tell just by reading this that you are a positive person and someone I would like to know.

Your last line says, "You are all angels in your own right". I say, you are an angel for writing this to so many people you may or may not know. It is very open and warm. Thank you, for you have made my night.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed.
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