I found this take on the sneeze very interesting. I had never seen something written about sneezes before. I too have had those questions but never really dwelled on them. Another thing is that this article was in its own way quite humorous. Good Job!
I do not know quite what to think about this poem, or the subject rather. There are many people out there that have gone through child services or had their moments with drugs and some have ended up in the same place -jail. I do like how this life was portrayed and that it does portray real life. It brings this subject into the light more. Good Job!
Wow this story was very dramatic and sad. I used to think that I had bad days, and some of them were really bad, but atleast I still can walk. This is a devastating story and if it had happened to me I don't think that I would have been able to write about it. You are soo brave to. Hopefully life has been better.
I agree with you the whole way. I have just joined this site this past week and posted a few of my things. Most got good ratings and comments. The ones I treasure most, hard to believe, are the ones telling me that something needs tweaked a little here or a little there. It may seem odd but I just want my pieces to be the best they can and if someone just comments with praise but does not off any criticism it makes me wonder if it really is that good or does someone not want to hurt my feelings. Thanks for putting this out there!
Wow I really love what has happened in this story so far! It has adventure, good and evil, and mystery. I love it! One of my favorite reads have always been that in the fantasy category and this one fits in it. Also it does make one wonder...Are there Gods somewhere that play games and toy with us? hmmm...
I loved this portrayal of drama, family, and romance. It is a very beautiful piece and is a very interesting read. In the beginning Beth sounded like me and I was able to put myself in her place. I just hope that my life won't have the same devestating ending, but whatever God's will is it will be done. This story was very realistic and made me wonder: fiction or true?
I really enjoyed this story of adolescent romance. I wondered if it was try because this same thing, well not exactly, in a way is what happened to me! I felt as if I were that character and that Conner was my now fiance Ben. It was great! I would recommend this story to everyone especially those that had a teen relationship!
I really loved this story! Usually when people hear about a spouse cheating they are usually upset and wish they could hurt them but the way this was written made me think about how we really can't control some of our feelings such as that of attraction. I liked being able to see in the eyes of the cheaters point of view instead of the person that was cheated on for a change! I can't believe I'm saying this but I actually pitied Jack!
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