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Review of Confused  
Review by Stellar Empress
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Liked the flow a lot on this one.
Easy to tune into, I would break it into shorter lines but that's just a personal thing to me - I find it easier on my eye.

Keep on writing.

- S.E
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Review of Help Me  
Review by Stellar Empress
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, I love the rhythm in this.
I read it so fluidly right the way through.
I felt the energy, I saw clarity in the darkness - that's what this piece evoked in me.
My soul danced with these shadows.
Great job.

Thank you.

- Stellar Empress


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Review of Snowy Greetings  
Review by Stellar Empress
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Afternoon Sebastian,

Thanks for posting this piece. It is a snapshot moment & well versed. It paints a clear picture, igniting emotions along the way.

I feel like it is a still from a larger piece, a piece I would happily get lost in.

Keep on keeping on, and don't stop writing.

-Stellar Empress


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Review of Shower Therapy  
Review by Stellar Empress
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
What an emotive piece. Your writing style paints a clear picture, it's relatable. Personally I had a deep sense of understanding this piece which is pretty awesome!

"She bathed in the in between" - I really liked this line along with "A lot of the time, she silently cried." - People keep their deepest emotions under lock & key, and this depicts it perfectly.

Keep writing Ada, you have great style & purpose.

Keep on keeping on - Stellar Empress
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Review by Stellar Empress
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, this piece definitely kicked me in the feels.

Really well structured, I enjoyed the references of moon dance & walking on one's hands. Just goes to show how powerful love can really be.

The poetic flow is great here & the piece as a whole reads great.

Write on!

- Stellar Empress
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Review of The Ocean  
Review by Stellar Empress
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Spencer James,

Thanks for sharing this piece, I'm pretty sure it resonates with many. Funny how thoughts slap us randomly. I'm glad you wrote yours down.

This piece is structured well, almost a songful light glimmers amongst the darkness.

Write on - Stellar Empress
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