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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Survival of the fittest includes making choices that weed out the weak. This is a good representation of how the older ones have to sometimes sacrifice the ones that will not be good contributors. Your grammar is good and you have a great imagination I think that this story is very interesting and made me think about the possibility that this could actually happen in the animal kingdom.
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