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Review by Muskaan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey goody,
Nice poem with a meaning.Its true, Love has it's own contradictory effects.But one cant give up on love that easily.Its addictive.
The lines i liked about your poem is-

It's true that love is a flower that beautifies your life, a fire that lights your way,..it may turn to a darkness that blackens your world and a thorn that hurts your soul.

The most beautiful thing in love is its contradictory temper and saddening events.

Love is hatred . .....I love hate you...
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Review of darkness  
Review by Muskaan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Manika,
Thoughtful-is the word which comes to my mind after reading your poem.Very beautiful i might add. the following lines i liked the most.

Then wouldn’t have been shine of dancing waves
Nor the greenery in mountain trades
Wouldn’t have seen those marbles bright of which you are pride
If it wouldn’t have been me, the lonely dark side.
Wish you all the best for your future work.
MUSKAAN
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Review by Muskaan
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
haha.this is really funny.Esp the nitty gritty details.This piece is definetely going in my favourites to have a good laugh ,the day i'm low.
Keep up the good work
Muskaan
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Review of sadness  
Review by Muskaan
Rated: E | (4.0)
hello there,
Very nice and touching poem.i liked the 3rd last line- time is the key to unlock your soul.
wish you all the best for future work.
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Review by Muskaan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey there again,
Yes you are a good writer.After reading your 1st poem,Got hooked to you.Good work.Please take out time for my pieces too.i'm not as good as you but i keep trying.You have a natural flair.
Muskaan
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Review of Wanting  
Review by Muskaan
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Oh god!your piece gave me tingles all over.Nice erotic work.Wish you all the best for your future work.
Muskaan
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Review by Muskaan
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
hi,
I want to be a part of WDC angel army.Sherry B, a member of WDC angel army is a very kind person and always have kind and gentle words for my writings.
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Review of For My Love  
Review by Muskaan
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi there,
Very emotional work.Its nice.Wish you all the best for your future pieces.
Muskaan
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Review of My Addiction  
Review by Muskaan
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Haha.I dont think you are the only one suffering from it.Most of the humans have love for chocolate in a form of addiction.But its Fattening if consumed in over-limit.But i think you should mention who are 'They' in your poem.
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Review of alone  
Review by Muskaan
Rated: E | (3.0)
well.....the poem is little melancholic.I'm sure U can write much better than this.But as long as u wrote how u felt.wish you all the best for your future work.
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