Looks like you have a really good collection going on in here. I look forward to reading more and more of your collection. Good luck with this book. Keep drawing your readers in as you weave your web of words so cleverly. You are full of talent and you show not just tell and I love that you really do leave me wanting more! Keep writing and shinning. Keep sharing and making us feel.
What a full of emotion little poem. I really like the title too. You sure do know how to pull your readers in and show them what it is you are saying. Your poem is very clever, unique, and creative. I like the way this poem makes me feel and even brings back memories of things long ago. Good job! I did not see any errors at all in this poem. Keep writing and keep sharing and weaving your web of words. I am giving this poem a rating of five stars.
Oh first I have to say that I love, love, love that image at the top of your poem. Wow! What an emotional poem indeed. I love it. I love the way you draw me in and lead me through your poem so well as I picture exactly what you what me to see as you leave me wanting more and more! Wow!
Keep writing my friend and spinning them words and keep sharing your wonderful creative talent of words.
I really like that you put what contest this poem is for and you give the link.
I like that you put the contest link for the contest your poem is for at the top of your poem I also like it when you put at the bottom too. I think it is a really good idea.
I love this poem it is full of emotions and drama and I do like the way this poem makes me feel. You really do draw your readers in and you paint a very clear picture of what you want your readers to see and you make your readers feel as well. That is pure talent right there. Keep writing my friend, keep writing and keep sharing!
What a wonderful poem indeed and the banjo played upstairs. I like this line as you use it through your poem and it is now stuck in my head! Laugh
This was a very enjoyable poem I like the way it just all goes together with a short little story written in poetry form and I can see everything so clear as you create another masterpiece I really can feel. And you list at the bottom of your poem that it is for a contest and you give the link. Great idea.
Keep sharing your clever talent and keep writing no matter what.
what a delightful, wonderful poem this really is. I like the way this one makes me feel. Although I had to laugh at that last line you wrote: A basset hound snores. You really do know just how to make your readers see and feel as you weave your web of words drawing your readers in and yet leaving me wanting even more! This poem felt uplifting to me. Thank you. I also like that at the top of the poem you put what contest this poem is for and you put the link. I think that that is a really good idea. Keep Writing and keep sharing your inspiring talent.
What a wonderful poem! March seems to hold on to winter even when it needs to let go it won't or some it seems! I love this poem, I like the way it made me feel. You sure can paint a picture for your readers to see and also feel as you draw your readers in! This is a clever, charming and creative poem.
I enjoyed this poem from start to finish and got a chuckle when I read this line: Seagulls danced the tango. I don't know why but it did make me laugh!
Keep writing my friend, keep sharing too.
I also like that you put at the bottom of your poem that it is for a contest actually this one was entered into two contests! I really think this is a very good idea.
Good evening! Coming by again for just a little visit and I saw this little piece and I had to come and see. I like the title and the description made it all the more interesting and so here I am. I like that you post in your piece here that this entry is for a contest and you give the link. I really do think that this is a really good idea.
You give a lot of good information, important information too. You are very wise my friend. Your piece is well thought out and every point is made clear. You say a lot of good things and give plenty of examples and so on but this line right here is the best one you put in here: The ultimate answer is to quietly do what you believe is right.
It would be such a better place if others really did do what they believed is right!
Keep writing and keep sharing. I really love your talent. You are very creative. I give this piece a five star rating.
Good evening! Coming by for a review and I was drawn to this poem and I was also curious by the description and as I made my way into your poem I found a heartfelt, well thought out, creative poem. I like the way it made me feel as you weave your web of words drawing me in all the more. Sometimes people can be unkind but talent trumps meanness always and will always rise above! Keep writing and keep sharing. I get to rate this poem and it deserves a five star rating.
Good evening, I found this poem and I was drawn in and curious by the title and by the description and so I had to come on in and as I did I found a very clever, charming, unique, creative and a one of a kind poem. I see something interesting that I have seen in a while in your poem the last word you began the next sentence with that word, very clever my friend. You really left me wanting more! Keep writing and keep sharing. You are really very talented indeed.
Good evening, I was drawn in by your title and curious by the description: Written for a newsfeed challenge, interesting.
As I step on in I found a wonderful, thought-provoking poem and my first impression was, Wow! You sure do have a way with words ♥Hooves♥ I like how this poem makes me feel. I also like that you put at the bottom the link to which this poem was written for, I think it is a really good idea that you do this.
I enjoyed the whole poem from the beginning to the end but I will have to say that the very last paragraph really stood out to me the most! I Keep weaving your web of words as you know just how to draw your readers in and I must say you left me wanting more. Keep writing and keep sharing.
First I have to say that I absolutely love all the information that you give at the bottom of this poem and that you entered this poem for a contest and you give the link.
I love how this poem is formed, the style and even the rhyme and the timing is really good. I enjoyed this poem, a Prince poem indeed. What a charming, interesting, unique, clever, and very creative poem. Don't you just hate it when it snows in April?
Keep writing and sharing. Just love your talent.
Good evening! I just thought I would come by for a little visit and as I came in I found a really interesting and very good idea you have put inside this poem what inspired you to write this poem and that it is for a contest and you put the link and then I began to read your poem: Nightingale Serenade...
I love the way this begins as you so cleverly creative your words drawing your readers in and painting a picture for your readers to see and understand. I absolutely love this whole poem from the very beginning to the very end you really do have a way with words. This poem is very creative. Keep writing and sharing. Just so you know, had you allowed ratings I would have given this poem a five-star rating.
I saw the title and had to come on in what a heartfelt, loving, creative poem. I enjoyed this one from the very beginning to the very end I really love it. I love the way this made me feel and it is full of emotion. A prayer from a heart of gold. You are very talented and you have such a way with words. You can paint the clearest picture for one to see and clearly understand. You have once again left me wanting more. I am very moved by this poem. Keep sharing your heart and keep writing!
Live like a cow! An interesting title so you know, I had to come in and visit a funny poem that is charming, clever, unique, a one of a kind for sure and very creative. I see you had written this poem for a contest and you put that along with the link to the contest at the top your poem, I really like that you do that and I also think it is a good idea.
By the way, you had me by the first line of your poem! Why can't life just be nice?
You really do have a way with words. Keep sharing and keep writing.
What a really funny poem you have here you are really very talented and I really like this poem from the very beginning to the very end. This is a very unique, a one of a kind ufo poem for sure. You can really paint a picture that you want you readers to really see and understand and I sure do like that a lot. I also like that you post in your poem that this is for a contest and you give the link to the contest and you also put what the prompt was in here too up at the top of your poem and I think that is a really good ideal. Keep writing and keep sharing your wonderful creativity
Wow! A full of emotion poem here. I love it! I love the way it unfolds. That next train is mine! I really love the whole poem from the beginning to the end. I think this was a sad relationship one that ended. I can feel the emotion in your poem here. The title fits this poem well and your sure can make your readers feel and see what it is you are saying, somewhere between aging and eternity. What a very clever and creative poem you have written here. Keep writing and keep sharing your soul.
Hello there and good evening! I was curious about the title and your description and I thought I would come on in and as I did I found a really interesting poem, full of emotion and drama. A deep emotional poem. I like the way your poem unfolds and you sure do know just had to paint a picture in your poem here that your readers and clearly see and understand. I enjoyed this poem from the beginning to the very end. Keep sharing and keep writing.
What a lovely song, one I have not heard before but is nice just the say. I love the way the words flow from line to line as you weave your web of words so carefully drawing a picture for your readers to clearly see. It is very creative, clever, and unique. I also see that you have written this song for a contest that you have posted up at the top and I think it is a good idea when you do that. Sing on my friend, keep writing and keep sharing.
What a wonderfully delightful, charming, unique, a one of a kind poem. Sounds like an adventure, fun and childlike poem. Run Sally run ~ I got that in my head now! Laugh. I also like that at the bottom you have a link the contest that you have written this for, I think that is a very good idea. You sure do have a way with words and you are so creative and clever as you weave your web of words as you draw your readers and paint a very clear picture as to what it is you want to say and again you left me wanting more! Great job! Keep writing and keep sharing!
Good evening! Just coming by for a little visit. I found this poem and was curious by your title and your description and so I had to come on in. First I like that you put at the bottom of your poem that it is an entry for a contest and you put the link. I think that is a good idea.
You have such a way with words as you know just how to write a picture for your readers to see and understand. What a wonderful poem indeed. It has a nice flow and it like a short story written as a poem, I really like it. Keep writing and keep sharing!
I like the title of your poem and I was curious so I had to come on in and I like that at the top of your poem you put that this poem is for a contest and you even put that link of the contest. I think that is a wonderful idea. I love the way this poem makes me feel. I like the flow of this poem. There are no errors that I could see. My goodness, you really do have a way with words and once again you left me wanting more. I that at the bottom of this poem you put the stanza of this poem and I also like that you dedicated your poem here to your grandson, Sam! How sweet. Keep writing, my friend, and please keep sharing.
First I have to say I did get a chuckle when I first read your title to me it is funny and then I step into your poem and found a very charming and delightful poem and I just love the image that you have placed at the bottom of your poem. This is a one of a kind of poem for sure. I just love your writing talent. You really know just how to draw your readers in and I for one am left wanting more. Keep being creative in writing and please keep sharing!
Wow! Really like this poem! I love the way it makes me feel. I like the way it goes so smoothly together. You really do have a way with words and you know just how to draw your readers in and you really do leave me wanting more.
I do really love this poem from the very beginning to the very end but this one line did stand out to me, the line: Crystal shore of wasted tears. Now I don't know what it is about that one line but it really does stand out to me. I did not see any errors at all. Keep writing and keep sharing. This piece would have been given a five-star rating from me had you allowed ratings.
Good evening! Just thought I would come by for a little visit and I found your poem: Out In The Fields and so I was curious and I just had to come on in and as I did I found a very creative, clever, a one of a kind of poem for sure. You really do have a way with words as your draw your readers in as you make your poem so clear weaving your web of words so cleverly. I like the whole poem and yet this paragraph really stood out to me: Life sings with clouds hence, my stormy mood The morning is dark Fine time to brood. There is just something about that, that really does stand out to me. And so that would be my favorite paragraph. You are really very talented. Keep sharing, keep writing too. I would have given you a five-star ratings had you allowed rating!
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