S. A. Mantell's (sunsetred) Reviews

Certainly a captivating subject and perspective. Other than at least one spacing issue I can think of, I say this is a winner. You can tell an intelligent person wrote this.

5

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#3811319

Review of Picking Up Pieces

Review by S. A. Mantell

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I really like this. One suggestion would be to describe what is depicted by the "glue"...

6

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#3810742

Review of My Tryst with Happiness

Review by S. A. Mantell

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I agree with you that people of this society put way too much emphasis on materialism and "keeping up with the Joneses." This is very well-written. One can tell that you have quite a bit of intelligence. Keep it up!

7

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#3810735

Review of Breathe

Review by S. A. Mantell

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Wow this basically describes what my nights as a child were like. Well done. I did see one typo but overall great subject matter.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .

8

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#3810729

Review of Paracosm

Review by S. A. Mantell

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I had to giggle because the first thing I did even before opening it was try to look up the word. I love learning new words. I've also always liked coming up with stories my whole life. That's probably why I became a novelist.

This is very well-written and educational! Well done!

9

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#3778937

Review of Alone in the Corner

Review by S. A. Mantell

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Explains it pretty well. But I would do something different with the last line of that 3rd stanza.

10

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#3775099

Review of Serra

Review by S. A. Mantell

Rated: E

| (3.5)

The writing could use a little help but it does sound imaginative.