This flows matter of fact and is fitting for the end of the story when we realize the speaker is a machine. This makes it concise. It flows mildly which makes me believe. I really enjoyed this story.
This poem actually opens up my mind to how an autistic child experiences his or her reality in life. I think this is meaningful and important for society to know. A autistic person is much more than a disease and has deep meaning of life. Thanks.
I love this poem. I have a lot of hope now. I also write spiritual poetry. It flows good. And sounds just like it was inspired by Emily D. who you wrote above your poem. It also had a good shape to it
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