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Review of Blackness Forever  
Review by takwa
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked the rhythm and flow of the poem and it created very vivid and powerful images. You have a few minor grammatical errors like the agreement of this with cries of laughter, but maybe you meant for it to remain as it is.
You have a real talent for imagery.
takwa
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