Dave's (tall-tales) Reviews

Ok, enjoyed it. Bit confused by the comma end of line 3 followed by Of beginning of line 4, that’s just being picky, made it difficult to know how to vocalise it. Good sentiment and flow otherwise!n pleasure to read.

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#4652639

Review of Where grows the compost heap

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

wow loved this, great content, rhythm and rhyme. A beautiful work, Thankyou. A pleasure to read.

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#4651200

Review of Contemplations

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

Really good, technically brilliant, most importantly , the emotion works.

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#4651014

Review of They Come

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

I like this...

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#4649189

Review of A World Without Your Song

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi Ken, a good song , naturally flows. Enjoyed it.

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#4649187

Review of One Look

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Captivating!

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#4649186

Review of Bella

Review by Dave

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Content excellent, scanning and rhythm not so much. As a dog owner, I’ve been there. You don’t forget.
Well done.

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#4649184

Review of Dulcet Drops

Review by Dave

Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

I like it.

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#4649182

Review of Zero then beyond

Review by Dave

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Like it. Content and context good, scans well when read. Thanks!

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#4648333

Review of Simple Love

Review by Dave

Rated: 13+

| (3.0)

A bit irregular but loved verse 4. Thanks.

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#4648224

Review of the monochrome man

Review by Dave

Rated: E

| (4.0)

First of all, I like this. That. Makes it difficult to review! Spoken aloud scanning could be better, but that applies to my efforts as well. It’s good,