When I first came to writing.com, I never expected to be reading "books". I just thought I would be reading things like poems and short stories. I absolutely loved this. The character development is spot on, the story flows well, pacing was great, the dialogue was realistic. I just loved it. Thanks for a fantastic read.
Oh wow. You really made me think hard on my own self as I catch myself doing that very same thing, forgetting that in the end, were all just human after all. Though I admit I am still laughing thinking of the back hair comment. That was truly entertaining. Thanks for this story. I know Ill be coming back to read it again and will have my wife read it too.
This story reminded me of a time I moved into my second home and I started hearing a noise in the wall in the living room. Never had figured out what the humming noise is and it doesnt happen all the time lol. I really loved this story. I wont be putting a hole in my wall after reading this.
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