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Review of The Island  
Review by Tessu Mugetsu
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a great story.

I don't have any nitpicks, but I do have advice.

You must decrease the length of the story. It took me a long time to read this.

I gave you a 4.5/5 because it was good, yet it was way too long.
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Review of Bridge to Lisbon  
Review by Tessu Mugetsu
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very beautiful poem. It grabs my emphasizes my feeling. Makes me think about my mortality.

I do have a couple of nitpicks though:

"And even tho we share the same roof " Tho is not a word. What you mean to say is, "though"

That is the only problem. Other than that, great piece of literary work.

Best of luck in writing.

~Tessu
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