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Review of Feel My Pain  
Review by TJ Friend
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Woot! Great poem. I can feel the emotion. I am not sure exactly what this poem is about, but I can feel it. It feels sad and angry with a hint of hope. I definitely "felt your pain". My only suggestion is to take the words "one more time" in that super long line and make them there own line, thus emphasizing them. Other than that, I really liked it. Keep up the great work.
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