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11 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I get to tell you how I personally felt about it, I can be detailed or give a brief review, it really depends on your work. I don't know any other way but to be honest, so I will tell you what you need to look out for and don't worry, I'm not harsh! No reason to be!
I'm good at...
Reviewing poetry, short stories or first three chapters of the longer stories. My usual focus is on the plot, characters, dialogue and details. As for grammar, I point out the most obvious mistakes. I'm not the grammar wizard myself, but everything else I'm pretty good at.
Favorite Genres
Supernatural, fantasy, action/adventure, romance, drama, mythology
Least Favorite Genres
Fan fiction and slice of life
Public Reviews
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Review by P. K. Arianne
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is really dark and powerful, you have a good choice of words. My personal favorite line from this poem is "The perfume of rot, the corpses make mountains" it's absolutely chilling image and I love that. I rated it 4.5 stars and hope to see more! Happy writing.
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Review by P. K. Arianne
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm an absolute sucker for love poems like this. I love the flow from how they met, how it went and how it ended, unfortunately a sad ending. You make a reader attach to that one line only so you could pull at our heart strings with such end. That's genius. Happy writing!
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Review by P. K. Arianne
Rated: E | (5.0)
Once upon a time there was a lonely Queen of the Night. Beloved by her people, feared by the others. Cold, beautiful and distant she was. Everyday, she would stand by the window, staring off into the distance, looking into the borders of the woods, almost as if she was waiting and waiting for someone. There was a story that the Queen of the Night loved a man she was never supposed to, who was warm unlike her, who had a beating heart unlike her and who was one with nature. One day, that man, who was commonly known as the Wolf Man, was forced to leave the Queen against his will, leaving her to soak her eyes with tears blood, begging him to stay. Because of that, the Queen didn't love anyone else for decades and stood in the same spot whenever she had the time, to wait for him in desperate hope that she will at least see him. Until finally, after fifty years of brooding, she saw a familiar man few minutes before the sun rose, standing right before the edge of the woods, looking back at the same woman he was ready to die for. The two looked at each other silently and there was a smile shared between them, as if an unspoken promise was created. The man turned into a wolf, let out a howl of farewell and ran back inside the woods, while the Queen's longing has finally ended.
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Review by P. K. Arianne
Rated: E | (5.0)
I absolutely love the idea you had there that I just had to rate it 5 stars. I don't run into such poetic pieces often and I had to give it some attention. Lovely and thoughtful.
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