So brilliantly creative, I love the metaphorical usage and the creative usage of a darker tone. I write most of my poetry in a darker tone too, as that seems to be the emotion that produces from me the best poetry. All in all you did an extremely wonderful job with this peice. Great job, keep on writing!
This is extremely creative and an amazing start to something you could even continue! It isnt often we see creative writing that is as detailed and fast paced as this. While there are a few grammatical errors, I'm very sure that after a little editing, this peice would be perfect. Good job! Write on !
I felt a strong sense of conveyed emotion here, and I was very moved by your poetry. I can understand the emotions being conveyed here, and you used proper grammar, and proper form, which is most definetely a plus. I enjoyed how honest this peice was too. Thank you for sharing!!! Keep on writing!!!!
Such a great point, and very well spoken, you did an amazing job of getting your point across in a clear manner, and you made it clear that you were speaking with common sense, and true care for the subject. An amazing job with this poem, as it opens eyes to a new point of view, and gets across an excellent point. Very good job.
This poem made me tear up as I could feel the emotion you put into it. It's a very well written, astonishing poem, and you, are an amazing poet. I loved how put together and well thought out this was, it's clear you weren't just throwing words around. Good job, and thanks for sharing.
Very well written, and very well thought out. I liked the sense of emotion, of anger, i could feel boiling from your poetry, as if you live and breathe the words you write. Very remarkable, and a very clear point to it. I hope to see more like this. Thanks for sharing :)
Very good , and very well written ! An excellent story with a bit of a twist ending, but capturing enough to get you hooked and keep your attention. If you added onto it, it could turn into a very nice book, or short story series. Very good job on this one, thanks for a great read :)
Another very well written story, I laughed at how twisted this one was. Good though, very good. I liked how the story took place in the future, it fits very nicely within the plot. I also liked the ending, twisted, but well thought out, and very well placed. Good job. :)
This one is a very well thought out story. :) I enjoyed reading every bd of it, and I adored the end, it made me laugh. Very creative mind you have, Your a wonderful author. Thanks for a very interesting read, and I hope to be seeing more from you soon !!! :)
I don't think I've ever felt deeper emotion through writing than I did when I read this. I started to tear up. This was very brilliantly written, You are an amazing author.
That was absolutely brilliant, I enjoyed every moment of that fast paced yet sturdy horror. This is going to give me nightmares tonight. You should be very proud of your writing. I especially loved the ending, it was very creative, with such a twist. Thanks for sharing !!
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