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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like all the imagery that you've used. I can actually the trees and you twirling around. It also peaked my interest as to what is that the letters contained and how things turned out for the narrator. My only issue was that some of the sentences were too short, and in some cases could've been written better. However, overall great job!! Keep going *Smile*
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