Nicely written details and a sad story. Baby Rose dying and Charlotte dressing the baby in a nice dress and sweater. A sweater made by the mother. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Creative and colorful. Looks like you spent time with this. The emotions are well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a little gurl wanted a pet monkey. She wasn't taking no for an answer. I had to laugh. The father wanted her to get a hamster instead or a dog. The little girl fot her monkey. I had to laugh. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful. We have all been this little girl. Creative and colorful and a good story line. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Groundhogs are interesting creatures. They dig holes under buildings. When they are sleeping, buildings are safe. A cute little book it seems. I like the picture on the book you showed here. This holds the reader's interest. Some good details. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and every new year, we hope things will be better. It is just another year. We have hopes. Some good words and a neat scenario. A good style. Creative and colorful. I love the picture of the dog wearing a new year's hat. Cute. Some good reflections. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes we write a story and we need a villian. Easy to follow and working on a story can be stressful. Looks like you spent time with this. Looking for a muse is rough at times. A villan. I try to think of a bad person I know. Some good reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A family of foxes living like animals. The fox children were bullied and didn't fight. The principal should have helped with this situation. A good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I was thinking of Lucy of I Love Lucy as she mowed everyone's lawn that time. Herb had a plan of hid own. He took a job, did some mowing and got his revenge. I appreciate the humor in this. Well rounded characters. Well written and a good presentation. Always:Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A wordsmith. They are talented and I think all writers are wordsmiths. A good style and easy to follow. Having a dream and waking up with the wordsmiths ink pen. I laughed. Priceless. Well rounded characters. A nice scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A favorite band. We would like to have on stage forever. Good descriptions and a neat scenario. Easy to follow. A nice rhyme pattern blends the words together and puts them into prospective. A rock concert is a great experience. Always: Megan
Sometimes our friends quit speaking to us and we don't know why. Sad. We try to find out why. They contact us at Christmas and our Birthday. A good scenario and nice style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style and good romantic sentiments and overtures. Sounds like the person passed on. Sad. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow. Lovely reflections and a good scenario. A neat flair and the emotions were well expressed. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and an old piano needs restoring and repairs. A person can only do their best. Sometimes, the beauty of an item isn't always that important. The sound from the piano was. A good scenario and good descriptions about trying to restore the pano. It still played. A neat style and easy to follow. This story is intriguing as well as creative. I enjoyed reading this Always: Megan Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. God does rule over us. This is uplifting and inspiring. Looks like you spent time with this. Heaven"s victory. Jesus. This says it all. A good devotional with words of wisdom. This is enlightening. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good romantic sentiments and overtures. A nice scenario. Easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat style and well chosen words. I smiled as I read this. The love bug. He is out there. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Love is great and sometimes there are issues. Nicely written details and a good word flow. The more years we spend with a person, the more we know him and sometimes things change. Love wins out. A good style and nice scenario. Well chosen words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A cat does know a lot. They rule the house. Cats know our moods and can be caring. A good style. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Entertaining and cute. Always: Megan
Not a happy story. Sone word prompts that were used well. A purple door. Other dimensions. A talking black cat under a blanket that says Welcome to H. Not good. Creative and colorful. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a delayed flight. Kids are anxious to go to Disneyland. A grouchy man seems to hate kids. The mother explained the kids are anxious about Disneyland and apologized. The man gets nice. The flight is back on. Easy to follow well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. A good presentation. Always: Megan
First Impression: I saw this and flash fiction is short and to the point. I wanted to read more. The prompts were different. I thought I would share my thoughts and observations. I do like fiction. I looked it over and read this and read the notes posted.
What needs your attention: I wasn't sure about the prompts. I thought the prompts should be something easy to relate to and be easier. You could give ten prompts and advertise the forum in Newsfeed. Maybe the story could have up to 500 Words. I know it is flash fiction but 300 seems a little short. I thought there should have been more rules.
The part I liked best: I read some of the stories submitted and they were good so I guess others were able to write for it. I like the concept of fiction. Reality isn't always nice. Contests are always nice and this seems like one others would enjoy.
Overall Impression: A good style. Creative and good idea for a contest. I enjoyed reading this. I am not good at flash fiction but I can admire those who are. I like the E rated concept. A good presentation.
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First Impression: I have never written Haiku or Senryu. I was curious and I saw this forum and I would read and see how this works. I started to read this and I wasn't disappointed. I have never looked up the meaning in the dictionary of Haiku and Senryu. I was happy to learn what they are. I find it hard to write a poem in a few sentences. Others make it seem so easy.
What needs your attention: Maybe you will want to do this contest in the future and advertise on Newsfeed. The rules seem to be consistent. Post examples of Haikus and Senryu. Just a thought.
The part I liked best: Telling what a Haiku or Senryu is. The ground rules are reasonable as well as the prizes. This gets the reader's attention. I like the poems that were submitted. They made me smile. I wish I could write these,. Looks like you can use any subject. I enjoyed reading the submissions.
Overall Impression: A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. The rules are clear and give good details. Looks like you enjoy Japanese Poetry. A good overall presentation.
The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore do not reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and or event being affiliated with in, This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author to this consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It was my pleasure.
First Impression: This is a good forum for Poets. I saw this and had to read more. A lot of good poetry prompts and looks like you spent time with this. I am giving my observation. Anyone who likes to write poetry will enjoy looking at these and try to do the prompts. A good variety to choose from.
What needs your attention: Open forum back up and post on the Newsfeed. I am sure it will go over well.
What part I liked best: Write a garden poem. Write a poem about a doll. I love dolls and this would work for me. Write a poem using a Disney Character. There are so many. Poems can be short or as long as you want. This is helpful. The member can decide the length. I was wondering about the type of poetry form to use for these poetry prompts.
Overall Impression: A good style. Easy to follow. Good instructions and step by step details. I admire that. Looks like you spent time with this. You put some thought into this. I am happy I saw this and read this. I take it you are a big fan of poetry writing. Well written. A good presentation.
The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reader and do not therefore reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and/or event being affiliated within. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it still up to the author to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.
Nicely written details and this is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. Food for thought. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. A good style with heartfelt words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and ghost stories told in the woods is always fun. Your father not finishing the story. You will always think about it. Suitable dialogue and a good story. A neat style and good scenario. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do love our pets no matter how they misbehave. They give us love and comfort. Easy to follow. Pluto is a good name for a dog. Heartwarming. A good style. I smiled as I read this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Dying eggs. I remember those days. I at my parents house and my son and I were dying eggs for Easter. I threw out the dye outside and it landed on the house. It was the same color as the house but my father noticed. Your poem is creative and cute. A little girl dying an egg and going to the park for Easter. Heartwarming. Always: Megan
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