Nicely written details and an owl and two old ladies who had met before. The one lady finally recognized her from the library. She said the door was big enough for an owl. Cute and entertaining. The owl winks at the one old lady. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. A man thinks he saw a man steal a green bag from an old woman. The man she is his aunt and he was holding her bag for her. A misunderstanding. The old lady says someone stoled her green bag. A good story. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and you can find anything you want at the library. Easy to follow and this is cute. A child wanting to travel. Creative and colorful. The mother tells the child to go to the library. It will take her anywhere she wants to go. Always: Megan
Talking about asking a question and getting distracted. You forget what was the original question. Been there. I appreciate the humor in this and the dialogue tells the story. Looks like this was fun to write. Creative and a good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I know we all have memories of how we learned about Jesus. My grandmother took me to Church and I am glad she did. This is uplifting and inspiring as well as enlightening. A good style. My was always be blessed by Jesus. Beautifully stated and words of wisdom. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some boys having a slumber party. Pretending to be at a night club. One kid pretending he is Jabba the Hutt. Cute. Easy to follow. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. The kids doing rude gestures. Creative and entertaining. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and going to Thailand and Oregon sounds nice. Some good goals and guidelines and a neat outline of your goals. Creative and colorful. A nice style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Best wishes in achieving your goals. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Memories can be sold. Yrading dreams and emotions. True love doesn't exist I don't think I would care for this world. Life can be bad enough. Nicely written details and looks like you spent time with this. Creative and colorful with a good style. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
I guess some families just think you need to get married on only a certain day. Nicely written details and some well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Everyone getting married on the same date would be easy to keep tract of wedding anniversaries. A good style and interesting. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good romantic overtures and sentiments. Lovely reflections. Easy to follow and this is creative and colorful. A good scenario and some well chosen words. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A little girl riding a dragon. A little girl can make a difference in life. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a woman getting home during a power outage. She feels ahe isn't alone. She talks to her husband and it is still dark. A hand across her mouth prevented her from answering. A cliff hangar and you always wonder what if? A good style and well rounded characters. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I kept hoping for spring. Some good reflections. A nice style. I don't look forward to mosquitoes. Warmth of theveun sounds good. Bees. Oh no. The pros and cons of spring. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do need to greet tomorrow and be glad we can. A good style and easy to follow. Silent respect. The bottom line is we need to appreciate each and every day. We need to care and help others. Words to live by. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A wild goose chase. Finding a brave new world. It takes forever and a day. Something to think about. A good style and easy to follow. You found a sturdy tower of strength in yourself. Good call. Good reflections. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is fun to get snail mail. Collecting stamps. Surprise packages. Various types of stationery. X for kisses. Postcards. A good style and nice reflections. A good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. Hearttouching. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I have always believed that a feather flying around or a butterfly is a message from someone who has passed on. Some good reflections and some bad ones. Creative and colorful. Written from the heart. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some good reflections and some bad ones. This has words of wisdom and this is uplifting and inspiring. Enlightening. Jesus went through a lot and we do worship him and admire him. Words to live by. A good devotional. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. This is sad. This gets the reader's attention. Flowers of the forest. Good reflections. You used the word prompts well and they played out in this story. I feel sorry for the man but he joined her. He played the fiddle for her. A good presentation. Always: Megan
First Impression: I was sad to read the dog died. Your kids wanted you to get another dog. You weren't sure. You said you would think about it. A new puppy can heal the hurt so I decided to read this and see shat happens. I am giving a review and my thoughts as well as my observations. Stay tuned.
What needs your attention: You said you had an old dog that died. You got a puppy that helped. You are writing this saying you didn't get another dog, yet. I was confused.
What part I liked best: You said you wished you could teach the dog to make coffee. Your wife suggested getting as pet monkey. The monkey could make the coffee. I laughed. I would want a monkey to dance, sing and clean house as well as make meals. Food for thought.
Overall Impression: I read it again and I guess there isn't another dog, yet. Well rounded characters and good dialogue. I guess you are the monkey who makes coffee. I feel like a maid but my husband helps out. The monkey is a good idea. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Entertaining. I was happy to have found this.
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First Impression: I have always liked wooden bridges and I am sad that they have taken away the wooden bridge. I like to daydream that trolls live under them. I was drawn to this and decided to give this a looksie and a review with my findings and observations. Indiana has a whole town full of wooden bridges. I have yet to visit there. I live in Indiana. I was happy I found this.
What needs your attention: I thought this could use an extra stanza. Does it have otters in the water? Ducks visiting? I guess I like animals in the items I write. No errors or typos.
What part I liked best: Bridge is built and newly painted. The river is sturdy. Crossings are easier. Fishing, playing. splashing. Rivers are known for those things. Steady beams. I feel like I was there and could see this. You bring out the beauty in this piece.
Overall Impression: Good descriptions. Nice scenery. Easy to follow. A good style. Creative and colorful. Well defined.
I smiled as I read this. Looks like this was fun to write. Impressive.
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First Impression: I knew Thanksgiving didn't become a holiday right away. I remember the first Thanksgiving. Not that I was there. I didn't know Lincoln made it a holiday. God bless Lincoln. I was curious and had to read this so I sat down and read this. Here are my thoughts and observations.
What needs your attention: I can't think of anything. It looks like you have got this covered. Looks like you researched this. No mistakes or anything.
What part I liked best: Lincoln making this a holiday. Sarah Joseph Buell Hal getting Lincoln to make this a holiday. People adding their own special holiday ingredients to make the meal better. I never liked the early settlers being called pilgrims. Colonists seem more appropriate.
Overall Impression: Looks like you researched this. The details were well defined and this is easy to follow. Creative and colorful. The menu wasn't much back there but they shot and killed their own food. A good presentation and a good style. This holds the reader's interest. I have always enjoyed Thanksgiving. It is a heartfelt celebration.
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First Impression: Feuding neighbors. I lived with neighbors being a pain. I didn't do well with neighbors. I live in the country now with no neighbors. Now, to your story. The neighbor sounded like a grouch but he did kill her roses. She wasn't Susie Sunshine either I thought I would read more. I am here with a review and my observations.
What needs your attention: Maybe the man should have lived for spite since the old lady was so mean when she shot him. He should have called 911 to go check on her.
What part I liked best: The man cared enough to check on his mean neighbor. The old lady blaming everything on the man next door. Setting him up. Really. This story makes the reader want to see shat would happen next. The blood on her carpet would hard to clean. That made the man happy as he laid there bleeding.
Overall Impression: Well rounded characters. Suitable dialogue. A good storyline, Looks like you spent time with this. I see prompt words were highlighted. Looks like these words played out well in this story. Creative and impressive.
i enjoyed reading this. A shocking ending.
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First Impression: These are conversations. The saying goes, I wish I was a fly on a wall. A fly sometimes get hit with a flyswatter. I thought I would read this and give my observations. Bits and pieces of conversations are nice. A fly goes here and there and hears things but he can't tell anyone anything. Your secrets would be safe with a fly. Maybe a mouse was listening, too. WE never know.
What needs your attention: I really wasn't sure what to suggest. These are parts of eight different conversations. This is what the fly heard. He buzzes around and gets to hear things. These conversations are interesting.
The part I liked best: A guy helping his friend move. A Spy and a listening device. Gummy bears for lunch. IFO? A flying object? A tree that was supposed to stay up and not fall. We overhear conversations in public and we pretend we don't. I shake my head at that.
Overall Impression: The parts of the conversations give you ideas of what goes on in other's lives. A cat saying it looked like meow because the person had a triangle on his head. I like the humor in this. Creative and colorful. A good style. Easy to follow and looks like this was fun to write. A good presentation. Thanks for making my day reading your items.
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First Impression: I lover cats and Christmas. I saw a story about cats and Christmas. Yes! I am there. I started to read and I enjoyed the story line and concept. I wanted to review this. You are a young writer and I appreciate this. Getting started writing early in life is a good thing. I like when animals talk and act like humans, so I found a story I wanted to read.
What needs your attention: Nothing really. Looks like you got this and went over everything. You kept it interesting. It made me smile.
The part I liked best: The cats planting a dead mouse so Santa would find it. I appreciate the humor. Santa wasn't mad. He loved meeting the cats. He knew the cats had planted the dead mouse o purpose so they could see him. The cats wanting cat nip. So cute. Said they like to throw up in different places. Maybe they know my cat.
Overall Impression: Talking cats are cute. Well written dialogue. Creative and colorful. A good imagination at work. A nice style and entertaining. The Christmas Tree cover art is cute. The cats get to ride with Santa and help deliver gifts. I love this story.
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