I was terrified, the whole story, though its terrifying is unbelievably so calm. There is a sense of acceptance for all the things that is happening a calm acceptance of everything and not just acceptance but understanding...which only heightened the feeling of terror....it's so gruesomely good.
Your descriptions painted my imagination an the way you tell the story made me believe that you have really experience all this....my skin crawls... that's how good a story teller you are... you made me feel what the character feels.
Love your work...this is almost like a manga to me.... in words that is.
I really like your characters...what could happen to Itachi...well he live, man so many questions...
The way you wrote the story , how you presented it, the play of words I find it really good. You are able to grab my attention because of this, plus I really love your story...this a manga-ish feel to it and I LOVE manga..
Oh by the way will you not develop this into a novel...?
It's a touching tribute and also a sincere one, that is how I felt anyway.
The fact that the subject/ character still have faith in God despite everything that is happening to his brother is a source of inspiration especially for those who gave up so easily in this life... just like me.
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