tonibarri's (tonibarri) Reviews

What a lovely poem! very well written. So often I read poetry that doesn`t rhyme so this was a delight to read. I look forward to reading more of your work, well done

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#3942555

Review of Prime-Pasta

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

a very amusing poem, I like this kind of work, I can`t wait to read more! keep writing.

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#3942553

Review of Prism Pat

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

i like this poem, very well written. keep up the good woek

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#3941884

Review of DREAMS ONCE SHATTERED: a sonnet

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

how very true your poem reads, I like this very much

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#3941883

Review of The Secret Life of Flowers

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

A very cleverly written poem, your use of words are brilliant, keep up the good work.

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#3941880

Review of THE WAYS OF THE HEART

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

a very touching poem, can`t wait to read more of your work.

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#3941836

Review of Not Even One

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

generally I like this poem but wonder why you didn`t rhyme the last line of the 1st verse, It would make it so much better. Never the less this type of poetry is my cup of tea. I look forward to reading more!

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#3902560

Review of Never To Forget

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I like this one, could this have been real and you`ve written it?

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#3902504

Review of Aces over eights

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

A very clever poem. A bit of history, well written. I like this.

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#3902461

Review of No Going Back

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

An extremely heartfelt poem I am reading here. I wonder if this was written as a personal experience, I like this a lot.

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#3902458

Review of The lady of my heart ( Revised one)

Review by tonibarri

Rated: E

| (4.5)

This a very warm poem dedicated to mum. I love the sentiment and although I have difficulty in understanding poetry that does not rhyme, I really like this.