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Review of A Day of Darkness  
Review by Victoria
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I think it's really good. Except you might want to refrain from using so much details about the killings. Persinally it bored me a little. I read a little bit of it and then just skipped the section. You also might want to indicate in some way, what the meaning of Rotna í helvíti is. That might help a little to understand because honestly I don't know what that means
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Review by Victoria
Rated: E | (4.5)
It's really interesting how you see religion. The drunk pastor had a point. God tells us not to kill people yet, he does it on a regular basis. Most of the time we're hurt that he's taken them away from us. But see, he takes them to a better place. You might have thoguht that maybe you got screwed over once you lost your ability to play football but, maybe he was trying to spare you agonizing pain that would come later on. Just because of one event doesn't mean you just lose hope in Him. He knows why He does things and in the long run maybe it's better that you didn't keep playing football because something else was to come. Overall it's very interesting to see your points and it's really intriguing though you do have some typing errors.
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