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Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.0)
great job. The only bad part is that it seems the government has forgotten the people. Again great job.
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Review of A VETERAN'S CREED  
Review by sarge
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
great job. seems to sum everything up. Thanks
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Review by sarge
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
great job bluejacket. Did you ever buff your floor? We did as follows put a blanket on the deck,turn a table upside down on it. Then we took positions 2or3 pulling 5or 6 sitting on the table and3 or 4 pushing. While on watch did you ever have a petty officer snatch your weapon out of your hands? One of us did. The petty officer said the watch was a dead man and told him to lay down on the deck . When the petty officer left we put the "deadman's" blanket on him and his pillow under his head. This was just before graduation-that is why we got away with it. Again great job.
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Review of Malice Intended  
Review by sarge
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
great job . Keep up the good work.
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Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.0)
great job. I forgot how much fun these still are. The first time I came across madlibs was on the tonight show with Steve Allen.
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Review by sarge
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
great read. I t seems to fit .
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Review by sarge
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
great job. There is however onetime the flag can be burned,with proper ceremony. That is when a given flag is no longer in condition for display-torn(weather worn). etc.
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Review of Gettysburg  
Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great job. You have summed up the battle about as shortly as Lincoln did the war when he said"They will little note nor long remember what we say here"
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Review by sarge
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
great read. Who is your next client counsilor?
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Review by sarge
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
great read. I never thought of it that way. Have you done any research into the"Black List"? There have been 1 or 2 movies about it. It was amazing that "Tail gunner Joe" 's targets in the area were some of the best that holywood had to offer at the time.
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Review of ROADS OF WAR  
Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.0)
good read. If only it were that easy.
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Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.0)
great read. I wonder how many will agree with you about our troops. I have one more question for protesters. Who do you think wants any war to end?
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Review of Peace Among Us  
Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.0)
great read. The saddest part of this is that it can said for almost any war you can think of in world history.
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Review by sarge
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
great read. I am wondering if you heard of a watering hole proved that it was a 'civil"war. It was Spangler Springs at Gettysburg.All fighting ceased while both sides got water from the spring.
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Review of A Higher Call  
Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.5)
good read. I wonder how many understand what you are trying to say.
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Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.0)
I was born in 1949. You never outgrow cartoons you enjoy(try to find some of the ones I grew up with).
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Review of The Wall  
Review by sarge
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good read. You got me. I was thinking of "The Wall"(Viet Nam Memorial in D.C.)
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Review by sarge
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
great set up. I have done worse madlibs(I made it up as I asked for the words). I can remember the first time I heard of MADLIBS(on the old Tonight Show hosted by Steve Allen. again great set up.
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Review of Peace?  
Review by sarge
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
nice start. Peace has been tried,granted on a small scale(India). How did the peaceful founder of India die-VIOLENTLY. America is neither the problem nor solution. Violence is older than the U.S. MANKIND is BOTH the problem AND solution.
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Review by sarge
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good read.. It appears that the gunfight at the OK coral is one of the best known western fights.
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Review of Wadsworth's Fate  
Review by sarge
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
good read. I can almost see this as a real part of the story
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Review by sarge
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
good read. is(or has there been)any continuation of the story?
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Review of A chance missed  
Review by sarge
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good read. How often do you think this has happened through history?
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Review of Five Dollar Bill  
Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great read. Would you be surprised if this was how "Father Abraham" got the bill he had with him at Ford's theater?
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Review by sarge
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great read. I can see Gen. Pickett saying this with the saddest face you have ever seen including moisture(soldiers-especially generals-never cry?). Question mark means WHO SAYS.
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