great job. Do you realize that you might have three groups represented#1"lives are on the line"sometimes used by protesters,#2"When will the war be over" always on the combat soldier's mind.and#3 "Give our troops a break" used by soldier's support groups. Again great job thanks.
Great job. On their behalf thank you. It has always been said, by those who survive combat, those who "Gave the last full measure of devotion" are the real heroes.
good job. I wonder if yo have asked any veterans who they fought for. The ARMY fights for the country. The INDIVIDUAL SOLDIER fights for his fellow soldiers around him. Again a great job
great read. thank you for the reminder. How many do you think will stop and think before protesting? Have you heard the one they have like this where Santa drops into a soldiers home? again great read.
great job. Have you ever thought of making this into a tract? You may have forgotten she was called unsinkable. The closest any human came to that title was Peter. Christ was approaching a boat full of his disciples when Peter asked Jesus to call to him. Christ called Peter started walking on the water. Then something happened and Peter began to sink until Jesus reached out to him.
good job. I wish I could give you a penny for every word written about either William Duke of Normandy or the battle of Hastings. iam sure you might be a little more financially settled if I could. Again good jod.
good job but you could change it could be any war in history. Combat veterans never really loose their memories of action they have seen. This appears to be why many of them do not talk much.
again good job
good job. Unfortunately mankind has never been able to give up one of his worst inventions WAR. I figured a good idea which may not happen in my lifetime. ALL nations take half of their MILITARY budget put it in #1 medical research(end illnesses)'#2agricultural research(end hunger)#3 education(end ignorance). Can you think of anything I have missed?
Again good job.
great job. unfortunately this is timeless. There is only one thing that may be a stronger wish for any soldier it applies to."May my children never be required(requested by the powers that be) to join the active military."
good read. I can not the big problem either. "A" reads " y" book coming up with"?"result. This is right.
"B" reads "y" book and comes up with "!" result. That is right.
"C reads "y" book and figures A and B are blind since he can not see what either of them did.
I read "y" book and take a cab out of town before the fight begins since I WROTE "y" book and none of the above spoke with me or they would have seen there is NO SINGLE results.
Sorry for the bad joke but I think you see what I mean. Again good job.
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