An interesting poem, is it about death? I have never been able to write about death and loss in poetry, I respect you as a writer for that. I can write about death in fiction, but not in poetry. Your words cut to the bone just as your topic. You have definitely gotten your point across.
It is amazing how so few words can say so much. You covered the entire lives of you and your sister. From your childhood with her holding your hand to the you holding hers at her death, you covered it completely. What a touching poem about such an incredibly difficult subject. Your sister would be proud of you.
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