Nothing negative to say about this--I very much liked it! It made me smile and it made me giggle at the end. Excellent job of telling a story with a moral wrapped in it --all in such a short poem. Thank you so much for allowing me to read this. =) Very enjoyable.
Other than the letter "i" being lower-cased and the word "you're" being misspelled (you wrote "your") it was beautiful and I felt as if I were sitting next to that crackling fire myself. =) Good job!
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