Very Captivating. I find that it`s hard to really blend poetry and music skillfully, but I think you accomplised it well :). The story is simple, but inspiring, and also can be related to (well, for me anyways). I`d love to hear what kind of music this is for if you get a chance (I myself may start writing a little more music instead of poetry or try to turn some of my poems into songs possibly for I love music and play a little guitar and piano). Also I see that (like myself) you are fairly new here. Well hello and welcome (3 My name is Aiden Black and I hope that you meet as many nice helpful people here as I have so far. Happy writing and I hope that you like it here
I have felt this way sooo many times. as though there are very seperate selves inside of me. In fact I even have a somewhat similar poem myself which is called "My Heart`s Words" that you may enjoy and resignate with. Very well done and keep on writing
This sounds exactly like what would be going thru my mind as i passed away...very well written and it definetely gets me thinking. very emotion and thought provoking
Very nice. The only reason you did not get a 5 star from me is I thought some of the lines varied in length a little too much and threw off the rhythm slighty. But other then that very well written
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