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Review of Pokeventures  
Review by M. Trivino
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hey!

So I read this, but I was disappointed that it was so short. I love Pokemon, so when I see it anywhere on this site, I read it! Anyways, I gave you three stars because I'm hoping that you make it longer. There were a couple spelling errors (which instead of witch, finally instead of finnaly) but that's an easy fix. Anyways, I'm excited about seeing this story continue.

One more thing! If you like writing about Pokemon, I would highly recommend checking out on the campfires on this website. In case you don't know, campfires are basically a couple of people telling a story together from different characters' perspective. Anyways, there's some pretty good campfires about Pokemon on this website and I really think you would like it. Hopefully you can join us!

So anyways, keep writing and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Review of That night  
Review by M. Trivino
Rated: E | (4.0)
I actually enjoyed reading this blurb. Obviously, there is more to this story (at least I hope so!), so I'm looking forward to reading what else happens. If I read correctly, you hinted your character is currently married. I was hoping to see some conflict play out, but was disappointed. Here's hoping the rest of the story comes soon! I trust it will be good!
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