Incredible twist at the end. Very strong and yet, it flowed to the point one wouldn't expect the character to shoot himself.
I like the imagery of the sunset, and the softness that came with it. I wonder what was happening in the man's head prior to taking his life. You did a good job grabbing the reader-
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