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Review of What it isn't  
Review by Twisted Progeny
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hey Chelsea...This is a really inspiring and thought provoking piece...Especially the last stanza...They way you twist the words around...Making a circle...Where Knowing that you dont know, means that you do..I like that...I am going to read some of your other works later on, after I post some new stuff...Take care Chelsea...Write me back...I would love to hear from you....Bye
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Review of Never Knowing  
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I liked this Poem, Mainly for the last four lines...They really summed up the entire writing...How her mind was full of troubling and frightening thoughts..She wanted it all to stop...And she couldn't take it..Everything around her was fading out and becoming less clear..And she finally turned to the blade..Though not even that..Understood her..I can relate to that in some ways..So many things and people I turn to for help barely if even at all, understand me..Or care to try and see what im going through to help me through it...To help bring me back to the reality outside my own little world inside my head..The only thing I think that this peom need to make it even better is for every stanza to half a little more connection..What I mean is, each line in the stanza doesn't have much to do with the last..But other than that it is very good...
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