This poem sounded like you were staiting some injustices towards American Natives. I always like reading about that subject. You made some good points. Keep wrriting.
I thought your poem captured the duality of one's personality very well. It almost sounded sad to be beautiful and popular because it's lonely up there. Good writing.
I really liked your poetry written for your pet. I especially liked the imagery in the beginning describing the sand and beach. Your Icer must be happy about this poem. Good writing.
Very wintery and white imagery in this poem was very nice, especially for this season. I wasn't quite sure what you meant in the last stanza.
Does it mean beauty is hidden behind the ice? I also wasn't sure what "deployed and destroyed by union" meant.
I liked this poem because sorrow does have a big role in writing for lots of people. Especially sorrow based on love. Your sadness was conveyed through the poem. Since I am older than you I will tell you, don't tear yourself up, and let it get the best of you. You found someone before, so you can find someone again.
That doesn't mean forget all the good memories you had with the one that moved away. Memories are important and sometimes people need to go through challenges in order to have a more well rounded life.
Just look at all the songs and stories that's been popular throughout history. All the writers had some trying times.
Very nice and sad poem. I liked it very much and the ending was nice because it had some hope of chance things might get better. But the overall imagery was kind of kind of gloomy. I still liked it. Good writing.
I liked this poem, too. I could relate to the subject matter because of my work. It sounds obvious but it sinks in when you read it like this.
Good writing and get more sleep.
I liked your poetry very much. I suppose you meant Mind Block as for protecting yourself from harm of getting hurt with the aid the of some natural things such as flowers, ocean and sun.
I liked the ending because it ended in a positive note with a help of a silk dress. Good writing and read.
Your poem was excellent. I think it applies to all kinds of love, not just gay and lesbian. I am not but I have an open mind so I have few friends that are gay and lesbian. Good writing.
This very good poem. I liked the overall flow of it and the subject matter. In the last line, what does "you're dead for a long, long time mean"? Good writing.
Your poem was very interesting and I liked it. At times it may of sounded preachy but that's just your opinion. It is your work and opinion. Right now, people just do not trust others. What is "smart to hell convey utter street delight", mean?
I loved your Haikus because it starts off like a serious poem but the ending is humorous. It sounds like you are a very busy poetic parent.
Good writing.
Sincerely,
Hidley Boxn
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