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Review by Violet Rising
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Strength in sentences:
It is absolutely peaceful…

Uniqueness:
Your strong vibes creates a circle of vision, of a wonderful world to enter…

Most Favorite:
The grass, soft as a bunnies tail,
laying down in the sun,
the light bright as a newborns eyes.


And this is what amazes me:

The snow melting away.
A contented sigh is heard from afar.

Laughs sputter from full bellies,
as no one is left to sit alone.


Acknowledgement:
You may think your writing is a formal set of mind contemplating piece. Written with spontaneity and child-like perception… But it’s more than that; I feel the kindness & sincerity of your poem ~is without ego~ :)
*Heart* *Heart* *Heart*
*Leaf1* *Leaf5* *Leaf2* Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem :D*Leaf2* *Leaf5* *Leaf1*

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Review of Like a Glove  
Review by Violet Rising
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Strength in sentences:
A very confident writing :)

Uniqueness:
Easily romantic, not to forget its wonderful simplicity of a song :)

Most Favorite:
Without understanding each other
We understand each others love


I agree, it’s so often true. Understanding is what keeping two persons in love :)

Acknowledgement:
Impressive~! It clears my mind on how loving- was never so hard to understand. ~Good Job!!~
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Review by Violet Rising
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Strength in sentences:
You definitely have your own style. Great job here!

Uniqueness:
Persuasive and manipulative in a jolly way. Amusing!

Most Favorite:
“MAKE ME A BLOODY SANDWICH YOU MORNONIC PIECE OF s***!”.

Err* not that one.

“Does not compute,” HDR542 stated.

LOL Creative idea. And the term HDR5425 bugged me more that it should…. (lol)

Acknowledgement:
Silliness often confusing and used too much imaginary, but yours definitely wrecks and whack my opinion ^u^

*Write on!*

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Review of Swaying Peace  
Review by Violet Rising
Rated: E | (4.5)
Simple,
yet Impressive,
There are much more freedom in these verses that it shows *

From the Great Sea
to the Father of Waters
they came to dance
and pray for visions
of peace.

* feels like I can manifest these so clearly :> beautiful choosing of words

The smoke of fires
and ancient calumets
rose into the night air.

** I feel however (though you mean it good), it feels sad in a good way... like replacing loss with clarity -as "being uplift from a burden"

The men and women
with running step
and stomping feet
circle slowly
to the words and chants
of the singers.

*** maybe, it's just me- but the singers I perceived wholly as angels - and the poem does remind me much of David :D beautiful - whether or not you intend this scenery- it's beautiful *

The emotion is in excellent path - it is straight and touching, and so very serene. I'm curious to see more of your poems, I sense there are still wider and sharping creativity in your fingers; for they might hides exciting characteristic in it *
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Review by Violet Rising
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good evening Kåre Enga,

I could not help but being amazed, swallowed, and hurled within the brilliance verses of your poem. The poem is extremely beautifu;l and full of emotions, to me, I can feel and sense it -REAL.

My country is actually one who has been stroke by tsunami in these past 4-5 years, you may have heard in the news- it's gigantic.

I can't help it, I will have your writings- stamped beautifully in the wall of my room- just because it's so amazing:>

Thank you
And God bless you
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