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Review of The Key  
Review by whiterose
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a sweet story! Wish something like this would happen to me!
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Review of A really bad day  
Review by whiterose
Rated: E | (3.5)
Sis, this is good, but i can think of alot worse things to happen than being locked out of your car and running out of gas.. maybe add a little more danger factor, maybe add a little more of a human aspect to it. have his mom be sick, or have his mother have the perfect woman for him. It is a good story though
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Review of Destiny Chapter 2  
Review by whiterose
Rated: E | (3.5)
seems like you are angry with mother figures. Might want to tone that down a notch. I love ya sis
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Review of Destiny Chapter 1  
Review by whiterose
Rated: E | (4.0)
It was good but hard to follow. the paragraphs werent well defined. Maybe try less modern speech patterns.
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