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Review of Partner  
Review by WilliamJF
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The deception is interesting, especially considering the ignorance of youth.
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Review by WilliamJF
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
a lot of funny doctor jokes, like the one about the blood bank. I like the strong irony of a seeming idiot being a medical authority.
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Review by WilliamJF
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is an interesting story. It appears to lack any moral that most children's stories seem to have. But I do like the repetition and small instances of rhyme.
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Review of Haiku #64  
Review by WilliamJF
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is an interesting piece about beauty
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Review of Ultimate Showdown  
Review by WilliamJF
Rated: E | (5.0)
I didn't know a quarter of the references. But blocking a bullet with a fist? Fighting Godzilla? This was very humorous indeed!
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Review by WilliamJF
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your English reads a bit strange in some areas. This piece is a hilarious love for technology and was quite entertaining to read. A nice satire on romantic relationships.
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Review of Deserted  
Review by WilliamJF
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the theme of nature. I like the simplicity and the rhyming.
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