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Review by WinterFall
Rated: E | (3.0)
Has promise! Wondering if I saw a synopsis? I'd love to see this work fleshed out either way, I thought it compelling and I wondered what happened to the girls-why were they burning? If there's more to this I didnt see I apologize and if so I'll say again I'd really like to see this work fleshed out; feel free to let me know! Thanks.


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