A nice. little story and a bit of suspense at the end- where did Molly go? Perhaps that bird granted her a wish of some sort,and she left the bed she had bed stuck in?
An interesting short story of experience from childhood. I have lived in London before and the sky there is grey too- all the time. If I was a child then I would of gotten that wrong too I bet. Nicely done.
This story interested me because my husband used to be the leader of the Green Party for Wales back in 1991.Nice job for a short story. The only change I can really see is that the spacing should be uniform,
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