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Review of All Saints Day  
Review by RonJeremy
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
good. shouldnt beep out the cuss words though.
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Review of The Tube Dude  
Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (3.5)
wasnt bad
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Review of Smothered  
Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (4.0)
i like it
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Review of Means so much  
Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it but not att the wording. "s***" would have sounded more emotional than, "stuff." i mean, i know "s***" doesnt rhyme though....
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Review of Come Back To Me  
Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sounds like something id right. its all touchy and stuff. nice flow. i like it.
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Review of The Life  
Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the word choice. (:
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Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really freakin' love this! its very relatable!
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Review of Good Vs. Evil  
Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (3.5)
It is good, but i think you could have used different word choice. it sounds kinda kid friendly.
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Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this because this is so true. This is how almost all the guys are in highschool. Its makes guys like us look bad.
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Review of Selfless Bastard  
Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (4.0)
I personally think that this is a pretty solid poem. The very beginning is, in my opinion, the best part. It has a good flow.
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Review of Selfless Bastard  
Review by RonJeremy
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the flow of this poem. I personally think that there isnt anything wrong with it.
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