Well had a few moments to check out a few of your poems...thinking I'll need a lot more time, you have a pretty full portfolio! You are very talented (I've read 3 so far) and I'm looking forward to reading more of the things you've written! I appreciate all the feedback on the poems I've written as well. Thanks again, it's been nice meeting you, via these emails! Have a great evening/day tomorrow!! Barbiedoll (Barb)
I've just recently started writing myself, in the last 2 years. I'm just a newbie, and this is only my 2nd review, so please take anything I say as helpful advice and nothing more. Your first paragraph did draw me in and I did read thru chapter 2. First of I think you have a interesting story that you are writing. I did notice some spelling errors and some of the sentences ran too long. Also the second paragraph was a little confusing to me. What I would suggest would be to slowly reread it to yourself, and see if it makes sense to yourself. I hope this will help you in your writing! Ps good luck in your endeavors Barb
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