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Rated: 13+ · Fiction · Dark · #1671166
A stupid dare
There was the old huge house that sat in a middel of the darkest woods the house had paint pealing off and the windows would open then close by the wind and some say they say a dark figure standing in the middel of the door with red eyes and was a tall dark figure. No one ever dared to come near that house unless they were crazy enought too face there death so one day a group dared one of there friends to stay there.

"Hey Sam i have a bet for you."
"Yeah what is it?"
"Stay the nigh at that old house"
"What are you crazy!"
"No i bet you to."
"No."
"Chicken"
"No i am not!"
"CHICKEN!"
"Fine"

So the next day he packed up for a night and everyone followed him until he got close to the doors and as he walked in everyone waved and smiled while whispering to each other in silent not loud enought for him to hear any of them. He walked in and it was creaky and ha dusty paintings of the old owner and stains all over the carpet the rooms were open and for some reason all the doors were gone!! It was almost night fall soon and no one ever stayed the whole night because they say they heard and saw things they could never speak or tell of it messed them up bad some was sent to a mental home crazy. But that wasn't going to stop himso he got his stuf up and slept in a old bedroom it was big and roomy but he had a feeling someone was watching him as he was trying to sleep and as he cosed his eyes sounds started to happen footsteps coming from upstairs heading down stairs and walking to the door but stops and walks away he starts to get chills on his back. It started to get worse the footsteps went back to the door back and forth he was waiting for the door just to open up at any minute now and he was hiding under the covers covering his mouth so he wasn't heard by anyone and he had until 7:00 am when they were coming back to see if he was aliv orwas still there and it was only 9:30 pm way far from that he was stuck there for the whole night and no one coming to pick him up at all for along time. It was a half hour later and it got worse things started to move and the air started to freeze and he could see his own breath and suddnly the DOOR swings open and a dark figure stomps in with a knife in his left hand and he couldn't even see the figures face and it reached over and pulled the blanket over and off the bed and as he begged forhis life the last thing he would ever see was the face of the the horroble ghost and last thing he would of ever said was

"No!!!!!!!"


It was lunch time now and the group came back

"Hey do you think hes dead?"
"I don't know he might of chickened out"
"Yeah i bet so."
"His stuff is here but hes gone guys!"

They all gulp and suddnly they run all over looking for him but he was never found and suddnly the wind closes the door and one of them trys to open it but it was locked!!! Soon a week gos by and they were missing forever and no one ever saw them again!!! Soon more was dared the same dare and had the same fate!!!
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