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Rated: 18+ · Poetry · Contest Entry · #2311387
After listening to a song, giving my feeling about what I felt
48 Hour Challenge: Media Prompt
- Listen to this song, You're Beautiful, by James Blunt.
- Take some time to write something related.
- Come back here and link to whatever you just wrote using an item ID "Invalid Item or blog entry {entry:1234567


Hey, diddle and diddle, the ferret did make a piddle,
Figgs' Nosepicker did not have any thumbs or toes.
The Spider fell from the spout, stuck on a riddle,
And the oats were eaten by the mare's many does.


The theme of the song was sad and poignant,
Having an unanswered love is a raw and genuine pain.
There is no healing, no salve, no ointment,
The Soul is severed; Life has nothing more to gain.


Count your Squeaky Cheese Curds as the sun goes downward,
Like little porcupines playing hide-and-seek in a balloon house.
The three blind mice had a Seeing-Eye dog named Mumford,
The Old Lady in a Shoe bought a pair of Flats and a cotton blouse.


When a person enters a Within, they no longer see Outsiders,
Everyone else needs to be in the present for them all the time.
See what they don't, listen to their quiet, be their counselors,
Words and actions tell the inside story. For all life is Prime.


The reason for the non-sensical stanzas and silly blurts,
How easy it is to not see the truth underneath the hurts.
                   188 Words

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