I am just a young avid writer, sure I don't exactly write a million storys but when I get down to it I become obssesed and the hours fly by. What I'm looking for most is feedback on how I can improve my writing. So I beseech you, please review! (The next part of Life's Roller Coaster is FINALLY here after months of being busy and not having time to write. Don't worry, it's nearly summer vacation and I'll have TONS of time to write the next chapter.)