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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of More Snow Melt  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your response about how you'd deal with your annoying relatives.

You talk about how many of your relatives are annoying. You especially talk about your brother-in-law, who broke the cable on the land-line to your home phone- that is annoying- makes me glad about having a cellphone. You talk about giving him the benefit of the doubt. Well, strange things happen.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a useful little item to find. If one is having trouble with writing, they could get some friends/family members together and do something like a campfire- where one person writes a few sentences, passes the pad to another, and wait until it comes around again. Sounds like a good idea.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Legacy  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. When a young man is about to set off for a year-long stay on the Outer Edges of the Empire, his father gives him an unusual gift- a large book. When the young man reaches his destination, he finds out that the book is more important than he could imagine, as it contains information on how to survive.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. A woman buys an old book at a second-hand store and is surprised to find that it's addressed to her alter-ego. Then she finds an even bigger surprise when a man appears from it, claiming to be her long lost soul-mate. Makes me wonder what will happen.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Take it all  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well, this is an interesting story. A young teenage girl receives the hardest news one could get at her age- she's pregnant. Now she is seeing things in something of a new light- the boyfriend being a jerk, girlfriend wasn't really a friend, and her mother- no words adequately describe her. Now she has to get in contact with some relatives she hasn't seen in some time.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to do some work with your paragraphs and sentences- it seems you've made partial sentences into paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh this is funny. I can just sympathize with your pain, as I enjoy a nice long hot showers- until the water decides to turn ice cold for some reason. Of course, I don't think I've mistaken doggy soap for my shampoo/conditioner/body wash, but still- OW!

Characters
I hope I never get stuck in that situation.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting contest. Create a horror story based on the prompts, which include sub-genera and style, and you could win a nice pile of Gift Points. Also, other prizes might be given out, such as Merit Badges and Awardicons, depending on how the judges feel.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting contest. Create a poem using the day's prompt and you could win a nice prize. Wait until the end of the week and you could win a Great prize. Sound like a lot of fun, with new or old poems being used, providing they follow the prompt and haven't been previously entered.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a nice looking raffle. Buy a ticket for a friend, a reviewer, or yourself, and there is a chance that you could win a share of the pot. Of course, the main thing is the fact that you will be able to help out some groups that are dedicated to helping people.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with the raffle.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Life is full of hardship. Sometimes one forgets about the finer things in it. One must deal with problems everyday. The trick is to find the good in the days, but that's not always easy. However, being with friends and family can help one deal with the situation.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar. However, you might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is something to think about. Life cannot exist without death. Everything that is born/grows eventually dies. It always happens, and it cannot stop. The trick is to look at the good things in life, as long as one has it. It puts things in perspective.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar. However, you might want to put some space between the paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Well, this is an interesting activity. Come sponsor a writer who is in NaNoMo, or join NaNoMo itself, and you'll be helping out a great cause, plus you could get some nice prizes. I don't know if I'll join, as I haven't had the Writing Fever in some time, but I'm sure that there are those who get the fever.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck raising funds for NaNoMo participants.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting chapter to your story. It starts off with a Mine owner, who also deals with drugs, having dealt with the last of his rivals in the drug trade, and he is making plans to expand his operation. The story then goes back to our pirate captain, as he and a crewman work on fixing up the shuttle that the captain plans to use to scout out the potential new recruits he's heard about.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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for entry "Chapter 1: Old Dogs" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this looks like an interesting first chapter for your story. It starts off as a flashback, with a man trying to deal with an attack that an AI had launched against the base he was stationed at. Then it goes to the present, over a hundred years later, where the same man, who has turned pirate, is dealing with the problems aboard his ship, such as a lack of crew and personnel.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Hollow Keys  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well, this is something of spooky story. An aspiring writer goes into this creepy house, so that he can find a way to deal with his writer's block. There, he meets up with a woman, who tells him that the only way he'll get over it, is if he maims and kills a bird. Talk about spooky.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Engagement  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a funny little poem. A guy tries to ask his girlfriend to marry him. However, it seems that he has some speech issues, such as being a little tongue-tied, as well as nervous. I'd wager that there are plenty of people who can relate to this guy.

Characters
Relating.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Otherwise Engaged  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. While doing her boyfriend's laundry, a pregnant woman finds a slip of paper that has what appears to be a phone number on it, as well as a woman's name. Now she wonders if the man is planing on leaving her, and their yet unborn child, for someone else.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Ain't she my kin  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is an interesting poem. Sometimes people forget about Nature, and all that she does for us. Sometimes they forget to stop for a minute, and smell the roses. Sometimes, people just don't think about things.

Spelling and Grammar.
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Endeavor  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is an interesting little poem. Many people work on something, and they expect, from themselves, that they will succeed. However, sometimes they forget that there is a chance that they could fail, and many times people do fail. The trick is to pick yourself right back up, and perhaps change your strategy.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to add this to the Genera Spiritual.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Wonder of It All  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is a nice poem, which marvels at the wonders of Fantasy. Sometimes people get so caught up on things that they don't take the time to just stop, and smell the roses that are out there. Very nice- reminds me of a poem I did myself.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
I think you should add this to the Genera Spiritual.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of ENCHANTRESS  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is a nice little poem. An enchantress goes about her ways, looking for a world that is full of peace, where she wishes to live. Along the way, she takes the pain and suffering that many feel in their lives.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar

Suggestions
You might want to add this to the category Spiritual.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of BUTTERFLY WINGS  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is a nice little poem. It describes a fairy, as she goes about her day, as she tries to spread peace in a world that is becoming full of troubles. Sometimes life can be difficult, as many are lost.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to add the Category Spiritual to this.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is an interesting article you have about the way that birthdays are held in Brazil. I can see some similarities between the way things are done there and in the USA, as well as some differences, but the main things are the same- parents being with their kids as the children celebrate another year of life. Sometimes that can be hard to find.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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9/11/01 is a day that is hard to write about. A lot of things happened that day. You write about your experiences that day- that you were at work when it occurred, and that your boss- or whomever- ordered the place to be evacuated- Was the place in NYC? Was that the reason for the evacuation? I know where I was- at school in Western New York, when one of the teachers came into the room and said "Turn on the TV- a plane just crashed into the Trade Center". After that, I think many saw the same things I did- the two building burning, gaping holes in them, and then collapsing. Hard to forget.

Characters
I think everyone was them.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Well, this is a nice little poem, which, while talking about a bird, seems to be an explanation for why a writer writes- Because they must. Sometimes it's hard to figure out why one writes- Because of a favored author, because of a song, some movie, some event, but it all starts the process.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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