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Rated: ASR | (5.0)


This is a honey of poem, just a little humor, To me it portrays the life cycle of the bee and what

and how they protect their domain. The rhyme scheme is excellent but maybe one tiny word that

could weigh the poem down corpses and purposes do not exactly rhyme. and break up the

poetic rhythm a slight bit . Other than that I loved it ! Great word projection !

Keep up the excellent writing!
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