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Review by April Sunday
Rated: E | (4.5)



"With WHO NEEDS THE SYDNEY OLYMPICS?, an author who gets around, J A Buxton offers not an editorial as the title may suggest. Instead, click here to see what wily antics cats outdoors can convort to in you own back yard. Wonderful take as Jenna and Chardonnay compete for a tree limb while the playful homorist Buxton watches on. Great stuff, Judity!" April 13, 2008 //
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Review of The Bean Song  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

April 12, 2008

Hey, there Caveman, how's it going.?

Your poem THE BEAN SONG is featured in a contest onsite at www.writing.com. As you probably are aware of this fact, it seems appropriate to review the song like poem.

Also, the wily perpetrator of this contest is telling folks you live in a cave. Well, probably one of those kidders, like moi.
Is this special poem sung to the beat of
MY GRANDMOTHER GOT RUN OVER BY A REINDEER? Obviously, here in the item per se, you fail to mention a tempo.

SO readers may sit at your table, where with a manly or hardy appetite you actually construct an entire poem centering on the importance of those special slow cooked, over an open fire. In broad daylight, readers may partake of the essentials surrounding the delightful gourmet experience of conquering a bowl of beans.

Hurrah for this poetry venue. The subject is presented well, not overly fried to smithereens.

Although twice fried rice and beans is another of my yummy favorites. to be sure. Just in case you're in the market for yet another beanery topic, my friend.
A special feature mentioned by Caveman is "a roll." While cornbread is another choice for eaters of this American Delicacy. In the North we encounter Boston Beans.

In the South there is not another state to beat for West by God Virginia has taken the art of bean pot cookery to an entire new level by mixing lentils, pintos, limas and great northern. Top the bowl with diced onion, for they've, the beans afloat in grease, at least at the casual picnics of my personal choice ... have been simmered just right along with the basics of pork bones, beef bones, and chicken bones. The latter disappearing after cooking for about a day or two. Depending on size of pot, of course.

All, as the author points out, lavishly flavored by bacon fat. Oh the very aroma of such a treat brings folks from miles around ... no doubt.

PS --- Pass me a fork and please move over. Mmmm mmm mmm.

Cordially,
April Sunday

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

April 9, 2008

Good morning Judity,

Read your story THE TRAIN WHISTLE BLUES last night, got up at the crak of dawn hoping this month goes slow as I love April. Yet, now everytime a train rushes through I am spoliled because of THE TRAIN WHISTLE BLUES.

Do like the take on Miss Lily and the strange olfactory senses she first brings to the crowded compartment.

Perhaps the fault of these flash fictions is generally a demise like no other when word count runs out, we run out of tracks to keep the locomotion intact.

Do like the birds being the only ones for miles around who are left with The ... Train .... Whistle Blues.

And of course you can always sell the title.
Which clearly fits r & b.

Cordially, TEFF
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

"b} "Leonardo S Woodrow writes of foes, forces which combat forming into eras timewise. When a loving couple, Kargers and Leann are found lifeless on a New York bench .. someone may know why. Much accomplished via written merit in this brief essay." {uer:teffom} April 1, 2008// "Invalid Item" 

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Review of Mind Buzzing  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)

Ceolsidhe pens, posts the poem: MIND BUZZING on www.writing.com only in the last hour. My goodness, and it was me who wanted something soft, a tad romantic -- with "questions, choices and decisions to make." Thanks, C, a nice shot in the awareness department, to be sure."Mar 13/ Rev from TEFF @ "Invalid Item" 

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Review of Class of 2003  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: E | (5.0)

Mar 13, 2008

Good morning: robert_rumery

Imagine if you will an extensive six day search on the Internet for the very same year as your poem.

Oh, what a coincidence!

Welcome to www.writing.com, hope you enjoy the fun of navigating this site.

Your poem: CLASS OF 2003 fills the *Heart* with longing for all ex- high school senors, no matter the age. Grads that we are, it may be easy as pie to identify with smoking in the bathroom, sharing laughs while cradling the year book displaying fond memories.

So for more on 2003, maybe when you get a chance, please visit:

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Be well, write on!

Cordially,

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Review by April Sunday
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Mar 11, 2008

The latest poem: WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THY LOVE comes our way, here on www.writing.com from the pen of new member, Luffy Chan. Very much enjoy the sentimentality and romance in this one. The author captures the poetic vocab style of a by-gone era.

Especially like: "It be the question on the lips of the world ...

A fine line, on among many, to be sure.

Welcome to this writer/ reader site, Luffy.

Good luck in all future writing endeavors from my desk to yours.

Cordially,

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Review by April Sunday
Rated: E | (4.0)

Mar 2, 2008

Hey, congrats on this fine flash fiction, Paul and welcome to www.writing.com.

ACCOUNT OF A PERFECTLY FLAWED BEING already soars heavenward due to this catchy title.

Here, Paul Fetherly offers the best line, a true keeper:

" ... in every soul there is infinite potential."

AT: "no suggestion" This seems a bit posh for fog -- maybe go with no hint.

Hey enjoy the site, my friend.

Cordially,

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Rated: E | (4.0)

Good evening, Rusty's Goof ===

Going over a few things now which due to a month long visit last DEC (2007) prompted our contest stayed afloat.

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stays open year round at this point.

The 2007 winners will be posted shortly.
Thanks for your wonderful patience and warmhearted entry poem: GOD BENDS DOWN TO LISTEN.

Seems like everyone is a winner of all six submissions. Kinda what Christmas is about after all.

Best with all good wishes.

Cordially:

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Review of A Christmas Fable  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


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Believe it or not, Puckboy, this is a review/ reward for your entry in Dec 2006-2007's

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We'll have a year round Christmas Contest apparently.
Perhaps, beyond even more disbelief, you may wish to enter again. But sincere thanx for this wonderful entry and your dire patience all this time.

The spirit of the winter season really highlights A CHRISTMAS FABLE.

*Heart* All of your paragraphs, the story itself, which made me laugh at the end.

*Heart* "good purchase" Re: the chippie's efforts
The Elm tree abode, the 2.5 dox children.

Take care.

Best in all future writing endeavors. Your edits and creativity here really show.

Cordially,

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Review of Soul For Sale  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: E | (5.0)

Feb 24, 2008

Sunday morning break from the Sunday papers . then discover:

Title: SOUL FOR SALE
Author: J A BUXTON, one of my all time favorite writers with a very apt creative & vivid imagination -- Oh that's Judity alright!

 SOUL FOR SALE derives from a prompt - a soul for sale on ebay. Wow! That's a great prompt.

But when Buxton works up a sweat making this one perfect, for who would dare change one word .. well readers are left with a series of repeats akin to ebay functions.

*Heart* "angelic smile
colors switches for the bidders, in keeping wih protocal for our mates over at ebay central.

Love the adjectives for each angel. These make the sequence come alive and center the readers on similarities, of course.

Best of all, Judity, this is your very own story. J A BUXTON owns her story. Now, am thinking by this time, Buxton, you're getting pretty close to a short story collection. One knows when to toss some, as good authors always do.

But my final advice to you, Judity and please consider taking this with a grain of poverbial salt por favor and an angelic smile.

If I was you, which is impossible for I am in the East and you are in the West ...
and you are Buxton & I am Moffett ... well we understand that nuance of individualism per se ..

However, I really do feel you might want to sell this advertising gem
directly TO or ON EBAy.

*Heart* MARY

SOUL CAFE ANTHOLOGY c/1994/1999  (18+)
Early poems written in my college days & for Soul Cafe, a read aloud poetry group.
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Review of SEASON ONE  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Feb 16, 2008

 You know, Mr. Gardner, I really wish I could tell you how much I've enjoyed this look at screen play -- how's tos.

As novelists, short storyists we tend to think we know about the usage of dialog. But it is with an honest *Heart* here comes a wish to rate this a TWENTY STAR for what it is truly worth.

SCREENPLAY --- CHRONICLES OF VESNA is funny!
And very, very entertaining.

For all of the audience who read Public Rev Page -- PRP today ... Gardner's Jan, 1, c-right has got to be the pick of 2008!

Great Job! An absolute MUST READ!

Cordially,

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Review of Switch  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Good morning, Scribe

Checking this author's bio, wondering how missed since this author/ current revver is also a 2003 vet on WC.

Flash fiction, SWITCH from the port of SoCalScribe is one of those filler types which could fit easily into an Ellery Queen size short.

Well done, twist at the end.

TEFF SAYS one not to miss.

Ah .. romantic mystery after all.

Cordially, TEFF
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Review by April Sunday
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Oh, if only ... if only the word count were higher.

A typed pg is gen 1000 wd.

So: Criteria for 2008 SHORT FICTION COMPETITION includes:

Authorship choice of three prompts, one in the woods, one amnesia.

The third?

A weekend gone awry. (Ah, decently fair.)

If only, if only WC contests for short impeccable prizewinning fiction were so well awarded all of the time. Mostly.

Ah?

DEADLINE. DEAD-Line? Feb 15.

Ah, two hours, 2Kwds and HUGE prizes, dear contest host?

Hmmm.

HERE'S ONE FELLOW FICTIONISTS!!!
NOT TO PASS BY ... Watch out ----
GREAT TITLE

*Heart* ATTENTION!!! SoCalScribe's seems to have it going on.

Don't forget to come on down to one of the best going ... click this contest today, PRpg readers, guests, wc published authors, ladies, gents, revvers, writers who like to win.

Visit @
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Miss TEFFY FAVORS high wd counts.

Gd job, judge.
So .. SoCalScribe === Have the marvy day.
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Jan 29, 2008

Strong. firm language captivates the interesting delivery of the lines of MATTER OF THE HEART from Luna's port.

?LunaNeedLove? has a prolfic portfolio of both short stories, poety and essays. Her articles are very well written and apparently get thru the classroom with good marks.

Here is a young author who belongs to "Invalid Item" 

Luna, hon, your writing talents are many and show a touch of the thinker in your work. Maybe even the thinker and the debater, while you remain diplomatic throughout.

Very god work with much food for thought.

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Review of Unbroken  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: ASR | (3.5)

Jan 29, 2008

Oh boy, rent due this week and 2008 taking flight like a slippery sled .... THEN along comes UNBROKEN by LA Powell and one sees and hears the plea which the author allows as another clue to the ongoing saga, here, on WC RE: Lisa Lansing.

AND IF that character name is not the best that money can buy the centering poem, UNBROKEN supplies readers with basically marvelous lines.

A click away on Auto Rewards.

Especially like use of the word 'asway' with details for the wind. Great word, seldom seen.

Favorite line, a real keeper:
"Awash in quiet lonesome
On a melancholy night."

Thanks, Powell, nice job.

Cordially,

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Review by April Sunday
Rated: E | (4.0)

Jan 18, 2008

Well, well, well ... Here we see J A Buxton assuming the role of one of those brave souls who ventures into a WC contest.

The title entry?
FROM ME TO ME, A SCOLDING LETTER

Part resolution worthy, part writer's sum of her work in 2007, this item is sure to please.

Listen, Kid ... don't be to hard on yourself for doing the erotica genre. In & of itself erotica (although not my cup of tea --- which I mentioned during my one rev for your attempts at stardom)

IF it carries a story which is absent of the ever-popular porno slant ... can be a source of publication at some point in your career --- despite what the "New England Mum" thinks.

In sum you also admit here to a lack of generosity re: GP. Simply untrue. For it is you and other gifted authors like the Powells who actually help very much for those yearly upgrades and membership GP fees for members --- by your kindly posting on Auto Rewards Page. So, sure, big thanks there, Buxton.

Next -- Continuing in sum RE: your honesty which states you don't rev often enough those who do rev you. Again, simply not true. You did do my vampire story when I asked you to and you did mention that the twist on the Boston Tea Party was well put. So also big thanks there, Buxton.

Besides, when writers write they simply become time restirted and let the revving go for a spate. We all do this, and you are far from alone, Judity.

Judy, Judy, Judy ... you are quite popular onsite and the nuances of yet another contest entry are simply adorable from your desk.

And if you really admire the WRITER'S CRAMP CONTEST ... by all means ... pick your favorite and run with it, while the new creations roll off your well polished PC and into story format. That is wonderful!

Well God bless, dearie in 2008. While it is probably an oxymoron to tell you, a wonderful author and friend the following. But since I'm here on PRP today. Sure --- simply do what you do best and continue in 2008 to now and always ...

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So when and if that gets going wildly down the tarmac of www.writing.com perhaps you will accept an invitation to join us.

Also, like the old adage of author to author goes, once my time at setting up my very own, first, frustrating, website (where now my fiction abides) when Fiction4sale@highpowersites.com is all said and done ... we'll have more time to talk.

Oh and the one hint I can offer your RE: poetry is this. Pretend it is fiction and simply Rhyme ON!

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Review of Stormy Morning  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: E | (4.0)

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"STORMY MORNING by Memphis Tweed suits this poet (myself) to a tee. Shown is the progressive flow of the pen as Tweed rhymes setting into a crafty rendition of a summer storm. Memphis Tweed, BTW, is a 2007 member of WC who is also working on a novel, evident in the clickable portfolio before you, dear audience of Public REV Page.

Very much like nature's inclusion in this one." Fiona T. Teffom/ 12/26/07

So, for your delight, a Holiday Season REV from:

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This review is a surprise gift for Memphis Tweed as The Wave, above heads into review requests.

Overall: Offering a slice of REV Wisdom, dear friends. When Miss Teffy revs, she closes her eyes, imagines the words and when the poem or other item comes alive, I wait a few minutes and think. Sometimes notes are taken in shorthand, never copy & paste. And then ... wallah, so is birithed the portable quotation rev/style, a gift for perpetual attatchement to e.g this poem or wherever the eye of chance takes one to another member's port.

HEE HEE !! HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)

Nov 20, 2007


"In I JUST DON'T FIT by Marty Livingston two guys get to talking. One reveals via an "inner stage" memories of childhood days spent with his own mother. The other offers a patient ear. The conculsion for this piece of flash fiction is not what one expects and simply adds to the content's surprises."
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A few typos which passed spell check.

At: I'm not mean --- not instead of no
At: man that --- me: mean that
sissy's is not plural use of the noun.

Hey, Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours, Marty.
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Review of The Deck's Ace  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

Nov 20, 2007

Open this newer work featuring a "younger Tori" from the portfolio of Howler.

Heavens, Howler, you are really getting good. This is a very good read. The details are splendid and can be pictured in one's imagination.

One tiny thing: If you get a chance and haven't already had the pleasure, perhaps pick up a copy of "THE SHIPPING NEWS" this weekend. This Pulitzer Prize winner really supplies a whole new outlook on the use of commas in a series. Simply adding this FYO.

Love the "red plaid skirt" ala the "skate board" ride. Tells of indivuality of the character.

Especially enjoy the following entertaining phrases:

"Harvard of high schools ..."
" ... dangerous smile ..."
" ... ate her emotions ..."

Fantastic!

Cordially, TEFF
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

October 28, 3008 oops sorry. So we are paying attention. Teff accidently leaned to the far right. Very unsual.
2007, same year.

Hi Roberta:

Your story, GLITTER GREEN NAILS looks fine. Grammar is excellent, punctuation the same.

A few notes from this desk in the mode of author to author.

Although, the voice of the mother's advice is relevant to your character, perhaps place the first instance further down in the tale.

A reference in past perfect too close to the opening hook sentence takes the reader from past to past perfect tense. Thus, reverting attention from the story's opening lines.

Another hint is to keep some of the references together. But here, one does see you include them. When you do, which is fine, maybe go with parenthesis or a paragraph break.

(Myself, I care not whether tense shift is used for it is a rule that it is logical to use it when the story line needs it. Since it doesn't bother me. See I can read anything, anywhere, anytime. In the shower, I read Andy Rooney; sometimes he's a bit all wet anyway. I can read upside down, sideways and hanging out the window of a convetible.)

BTW your "caddilac" comes in as impressive.

Trying not to change tenses is like going against common sense. Most of the study I am doing on writing has been of two schools. For tense shift when logical or never.

Of course the manual of writing do's: THE ELEMENTS OF STYLE says no changes. But there is a tense shift add-in in this book. And it is easily accessible online. E-mail if you need further info, Roberta.

GLITTER GREEN NAILS offers a good plot.

You may be getting a tad overbooked with adjectives, but these too are still within yur syntax limitations. The "satin pink" followed by peach skin -- just paints such a rosy glow, does it not?

Oh, yes -- very good dialogue features @
"Your self absorption ..." Where the husband in the story really lays it on. Great! This also shows realism against the petty and is a good example for a between the lines morality theme.

Talent evident, here, Roberta. Best to you and yours this autumn.

Oh, the first to review this impressive story, am I? Well, let's start you out high with a well deserved Five star for a welcome creative outlook in the crime genre === fiction tale: GLITTER GREEN NAILS.
That is one great title, hon.

Cordially,

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Roberta, when first joining www.writing.com in Oct, 2004 -- it was then customary to show merit badges on PubRevPg. Also at that time authors often listed thier items. Usually revs were automatically exchanged at that point. It was a mark of community sharing and done in good spirit at the time. Now it is shunned upon but Miss Teff still uses this ploy, being a creature of habit.
Thanks for the read.
Enjoy Sunday Oct 28, 2007

And Happy Halloween to all members.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)

October 28, 2007 Sunday

Hello The Powells:

Reading REPORT FROM THE LANSING INVESITGATION by L A Powell, am thankful for the opening intro recap provided here by the author.

Love: Dr. Flag's degrees in both "Literature and Psychology." Nice touch and great ploy which suits the ongoing tale of Lisa Lansing. Plus one can't get a much better character name than Lansing. Which is perfect!

In this story "Dallas & Fort Worth" are starting to become evident as important setting background. All as it should be. When one has only been to Texas, once this is important to this reader (myself.) So big thanks.

Great line below which certainly adds both to the flare and sequential happenstance while tying the piece together.
--- Namely: " ... evil cannot love , it can only hate ...."

Pretty sure on record previously choosing EVIL WIND as my particular favorite of the GOLDMAN SERIES, L A.

Goldman stands out as one of those all around great investigators whose cop side seems always present and accounted for. If anyone finds Lansing, he's the man.

This character, Goldman reminds of:

JAMES LEE BURKE'S --- Dave Robicheaux from Louisiana. Teff can't get enough of that famous series. Which only goes to show placing the ideas and character thoughts into the script is a very important part of the story details. E.g. we like when Dave takes out a skiff next to his "bait shop." It affords an escape from housework or whatever fills the everyday life.

TIE-IN PART OF THIS REV ===
Anyways, had a rough day yesterday while immersion in an online search on 'writing' goes on and on. English is a rather dry subject to write about and research for a journalism piece, undertaken by this reviewer, affords a cry for a spark of interest. Just one would be nice.

Afterall we were taught most of this stuff from grade school, through highschool and straight past college. Now we learn to bend not succumb to the dryness as authors, right?

This morning felt fresh and consider the point that stories really should engage reader attention which the LANSING SERIES is certainly capturing on www.writing.com.
Thanks for that novel/nuance overall.

Cordially,

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Rated: E | (4.0)

October 21, 2007

Good morning this Sunday -- Roderick Lewis:

Welcome to www.writing.com. Finding your poem: THE PATH TO THE HOUSE UNPAINTED and reading same am spontaneously thrilled with the poetic renditions you offer here.

This is an enjoyable read -- start to finish and one can see that it may not have been that easy to compile.

Best in all future writing endeavors.

Cordially, TEFF

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)



Hello: to Lauren McKinley:

Your item: WHY DO YOU HATE ME?

IS BOTH STARTLNG AND PROBABLY ACCURATE.

ESPECIALLY in the world today and thoughout the history of literature as one allows for antogonists, other villians in stories.

Sometimes a reason is there in a short story, or novel,novells and one need not like all the characters.

With your item: which is highly readable one feels the differences that lie in wait for authors. Seldom do boycots last however, as we are taught to ignore what is saturating a part of comradie and community regards for the creative works of others. Refer of course to library shelves, there's the venue to enjoy.

Instead we boost intellectual doubt, leave naysayers behind or as you do, McKinley write about it on topic.

Extremely well done, well planned and truth is here for the taking in the intro and evident in the piece. While, fiction after all, right?

Cordially,

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Review of The Hood Ornament  
Review by April Sunday
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Sunday, Oct 14 is a lucky day for Miss TEFF.

Finding: HOOD ORNAMENT from the portfolio of Going Gonzo affords a very good shakedown for a comedy short story which is winning material.

Favorite lines among many:

Going Gonzo -- great pen

"I loathed everything about him ..."

J C Penney's wardrobe

clearly mad ... authors says of character -- he was clearly mad -- clearly is one fine adverb. Some writing advice instigates adverb use is a reason to point the finger at items. Best not dissuade standards into a belief that adverbs are not to be found in short word count short stories. Imagine that. Beware!

Myself(?) I adore well chosen adverbs every single time.

Of: my perch. Again, well chosen noun. Perch can be used for where staties hide, birds roost or we place this short story, Gonz. TTT. To the top, my friend.

Uh-oh --- noh. Not fifteen to life?

Ah, thanks, for the redemption at the end.

Cordially, TEFF
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