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Review of Winter Homecoming  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Family is very important and you showed this through your words in your poem. I could imagine this person trudging along with great anticipation and longing to be home with family and friends. I could feel the tiredness and yet the strength and will to keep going toward the loved ones. Anticipating the warmth of family and a source of heat as well as a place to rest probably helped each step feel lighter. Your poem is vivid and I found nothing to distract me from reading it.

Thank you for writing and sharing your homecoming word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of A Curious Thought  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can imaging the questions and wondering "the why things are they way they are". I remember listening to a I guess a sermon or talk about Job and the ending of the Story. Job wanted to know why. God talked with Him about wales and other things without answering why. Job was satisfied because he heard words from God. The moral of the story is hearing a word from God makes all the positive difference. I hope this helps you. I have not exactly been in the situation you describe but I do know from experience when God seems far away it is usually because I moved. Your story is clear and easy to read.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Blue Easter Eggs  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
By the time I finished your story I had to take moment to untangle the dream from the awake state too. It's nice that things worded out. I'm glad I found and read your story because I like nature and could relate to the character.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
If you is a person I would guess this person is very special. If it is about writing, I understand how imagination can keep a person awake. All of my life it has taken me a long time to get to sleep. I guess it's normal for me. If it is writing that is causing your wakefulness You could consider keeping paper or electronics near your bed and writing down ideas. If it is a person, you could write a letter or make notes to see if this helps.

Thank you for writing and sharing your wakefulness word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Star Gazing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the head of a shooting star making their day or rather night because so far I have never seen a shooting star. I could imagine them watching the sky and scanning to see the stars. Your story is realistic because people are amazed by star watching.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about having a wonderful day that got better while watching the stars.


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Review of For S.G.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel your sadness, your joy, and your hope for the future. Your thankfulness permitted this story. You kept me interested in reading about you and your friend. I'm glad you two had the valuable time together. I hope you doing better.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your friend with me and WdC members.


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Review of Fruits  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree that fruit is alive other wise it wouldn't grow and have seeds to produce more fruit. Peach, pink, purple, and Hannah probably will be good friends. I enjoyed reading your story. I could imagine the characters, scene, and hear the conversation in my imagination as I read your words. It is realistic and believable as a fictional story. I wonder what will happen next?

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the fruit with me and WdC members.


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Review of More Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Honesty is wonderful and I can see how it had a positive effect on your life. I'm glad you have this special and close relationship with someone who cares about you. Your story is about transformation which we all experience through the help of someone who cares. I'm glad things worked out for you.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about your positive transformation.


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Review of Chopsticks  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The ending about sushi can be eaten as finger food caused me to chuckle, thanks. I can relate to the challenge of using chop sticks because I also have struggled and sill do to use them properly. This poem reminded me that I still learn to properly use chopsticks because it is an unfinished lesson waiting for me attention again. I read our words calmly and enjoyed the adventure. I hope to obtain a pair of chopsticks soon and practice using them just to see how proficient I can become.

Thank you for writing and sharing your chopstick adventure with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could picture the road block and someone pacing from one road to the other trying to figure out how to resolve this dilemma. I suppose the blockage could be climbed if it weren't too high, but according to wisdom going too high can be a disaster. So the road less traveled might be that precarious road meant for people who take risks. If it were easy everyone would travel that triad. You write a thought provoking poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art poem with demand WdC members.


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Review of In time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the ending of your story. Smugness and pride make for a fall. I'm glad the person created is own success. Your story shows that even with rejection the possibilities are endless for success. The characters conversation was interesting and realistic. The story is easily believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Being a star is not only for acting or singing. You can be a star as a writer or within any other activity you choose. A spotlight may not be part of may jobs like being on stage but recognition is possible. Your writing is realistic and it has introduced me to you and who you are. In a way because I'm reading your words and responding to them, you are a star and in the spot light, my spotlight, I see you, your words.

Thank you for writing and letting me get to know you and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Miracle  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your poem brought back a memory of a movie about s child that had been kidnapped and held for years before he finally was about to go home The movie is based on a true story. As I read your poem I could recall images and sounds from the remembered movie. I'm glad you wrote this wonderful tribute poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem with me and WdC ,embers.


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Review of Miles from Home  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm very glad you are home again and hope you never need to leave again. I can understand what you mean only from my point of view and life experiences. I've had times when there's an empty space for example. Your story is realistic, believable, and a view of your life which I'm glad to know. I hope you are well and thriving.

Thank you for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I know AI is a top edged sward and if allowed to be oner taken by one side verses being carefully monitored we could be in a lot of trouble. Also the human factor of someone pushing the wrong button could be potentially dangerous. I also realize it can be beneficial if used carefully and humanely. Hopefully it will not be used to gain power over people for control and other unsavory purposes. God is ultimately in control so I will rely on Him.

Thank you for writing this article about AI and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Decision  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the rhythm of your poem as I was guided from word to word until reaching the end. I agree that how we live determine where we will spend eternity. I am thankful to Jesus for my guidance and His care for me. I also am glad I read your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very much for the laughter. It made my day. Laughter is good deicing so it's been said. I probably wouldn't make this recipe because it seems to be too much work of the unnecessary kind, lol. Your story was fun to read and as I read it I imagined the funny stuff in my head. Yes I can believe this story about making burgers.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art recipe with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem has much knowledge and is informative. It's easy to read and understand. The word flow is smooth and inviting to the reader. I like what is stated but as I read it I thought about it with God involved.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Big Day  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Come unto me little children is what Jesus said in scripture. Parenting is challenging. I can imagine the phone call was challenging for both parties. Sounds like there might be issues because of the earlier abuses.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Gory Pumpkin  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your ending about giving to neighborhood children. Of course, there are people who have to create conflict by causing trouble. I can imagine they are unhappy or jealous or simply do not like children. Sadly this takes the fun out of an activity like Halloween. Your poem shows the character's actions, a scene that is believable, and the story is realistic.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem reminds me of sci-fi. It brought the idea of a mystic and a rose that combined. I could imagine the rose-colored mystic rising into the sky. A sphere similar to a planet or some kind of craft also occurred to me.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art poem with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem is easy to read and understand. I can see fear and wanting to forget battling for supremacy, but also loneliness jumping into the fray. I hope things are better now

I don't what I am...[know] This word might help your poem and the rhythm of the poem read better.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Kindness has value beyond measure. Kindness should overflow beyond measure as God intended. These thoughts came into my mind as I read your word art. Humans are capable of many emotions and have free will. It is what humans do in the decision-making process that makes kindness triumphant or brings hate forward. I prefer kindness every day. Your article is well-expressed and easy to understand. I hope more people read this.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about kindness with me and WdC members.


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Review of Lingering Kiss  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This devoted love seems like it can endure at all times. I believe if you like someone as well as love them People can stay together through the good and the difficult times. The rhythm of your poem showed me smoothly a journey from the beginning of your poem to the ending. I saw two people adoring each other and working together to live a full and happy

Thank you for writing and sharing your love poem with me and WdC members.life.


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Review of The Movie  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I agree about the prices for going to see a movie. Depending on how much I like and enjoy the movie I will buy it for my collection. I do not go to the movies. I was a child the last time I went to see a movie. Movies are nice entertainment for whoever likes a particular genre or flick.

Thank you for writing and sharing your movie word art with me and WdC members.


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