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Review of To The Sea  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see in my imagination the different changes and yet these changes are regular and stable because they happen in cycles. We see it over and over again and expect it will not change. Yet this stability changes in an ordered fashion. Your words showed this vividly.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand your point of view. In many ways, I also have done what you wrote about. Whenever possible I rescue insects. Eating meat no matter the source I try to do it in moderation. Do you know that plants are similar? Scientifically they have a social system. Plants also are community species.

Whenever posible I help animals as much as possible. I feel bad when an animal dies because people think they are disposable. Insects are precious and I once had a pet tarantula. I've also had for short periods several other species of bugs and insects so I could observe them. Before the end of summer, I would let them go and was thankful for knowing them.

I appreciate your word art which gave me further insight into the world of bugs and insects. It also helped me to get to know you.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Two islands  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could picture the scenes and feel the longing for peaceful quiet. I get it because I am blessed with ten plus acres where it is quiet and peaceful.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about finding peaceful quiet through your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I thought about being thankful for this experience because you know first-hand and can help other people who will be faced with this kind of challenge. Experience is a good teacher and you can share your knowledge. I also want to pass on: You learned from this mistake. You are the expert. When you were weak in that moment it became a strength later.

Thank you for sharing your word art about strength vs weakness and sharing it with me and WdC members. This is a testimony to your strength and ability to learn from your experiences, you are awesome! God is good for helping you.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I learned more than I knew about Jane Austin because I read this newsletter. Now I'm curious about what she wrote and hope to explore some of her writing. You presented the facts in a relaxed and honorable manner about Jane Austin. I feel as if I've met her.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about Jane Austin with me and WdC members.


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Review of End of Days  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Seeing hands holding with love and compassion is wonderful view of two people who care for and love each other. Your words gently showed me the ash for following this story. It made me want to continue reading. I'm glad your poem was found through [read and review].

Thank you for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Gone  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a fast reading which seems to be the way time flies. I could feel time passing as I read your words. I could see time racing past me as pages flipper before me eyes. I could feel time slipping by at a quick rate and each day changing to tomorrow.

Thank you for writing and sharing the quickness of time through your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The last line of your story had me rolling with laughter, thank you very much. I need that!

I could visualize the scene, the characters, hear the conversation, and feel something was going to happen that would be interesting. I didn't see this ending coming, you got me good.

Thank you for sharing your word art about meeting nice people with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I've heard of people dying and life returning. I can imagine the music and experience of heaven as you showed me through your word art. The longing and expectation of being in heaven seemed to be part of your existence and hope for the future.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Runaway  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You left the visual to the reader to imagine, nice touch. I could see and hear the actions and reactions between the two characters through your dialogue. You used a patient officer who didn't't roughly extract the other individual from cover which made reading your story a please experience. The mystery about the individual looks like remains but the ending gives a clue to something unusual and unique. Imagination has plenty of room to create the ending.

Thank you for writing this mystery word art and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see the seagulls flying together as one falls from the group. The rising of the sun giving light of day which the seagull watches as it lay dying. It is sad.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the seagull or whatever imagination creates with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'm glad you had fun while writing this poem. Your words give me reason to ponder the days, which for me are blessings that God gifted to me. Life is a precious gift and how we respond to it is the difference between gladness or sorrow. POV makes a huge difference. You've shown the different POV.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your words about POV word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Love's Embrace  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
For me the love of God is most important. I pondered this love as I read your poem.

I could feel the strength of love in your words for people and especially a special someone. Determination to nurture love is evident in this poem story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poem story word art about love with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I hope that shame for families isn'r wear ir is exactly because families are precious and evil is working hard to break them. Hopefully Koko will be rehabilitated. I could see Koko with bulging eyes and a lot of hope for a new view but disappointed because of having to enter rehabilitation.

Thank you for writing and sharing Koko's story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I know you tow will always be together in spirit because you showed this to me through your word art. Your love is evident and true and I believe will keep alive your special person in your heart always. Therefore they will live in your heart.

Thank you for writing this poem and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Review of Goat  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can picture several different species of cloven animals approaching the feeding area and having appreciation for the person who feeds, waters, and loves them. I hope to have some livestock species on my homestead soon.

Thank you for writing this poem and for sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Review of Yes, redbuds sing  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can see the red but trees that grow on my homestead and other flowering red but species like flowers and shrubs deep in the forest which is mostly my imagination at work. The red but trees are real. I could hear the rustling leaves and feel the warmth of spring. You wrote a nice tribute to spring and the red buds.

Thank ou for writing and for sharing your word art about the red buds with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm very glad this story ended well with a united family of faith. A mean and scary black cat with red eyes is easy to visualize. The fear and the dread as they shook in their or under their beds I could feel. The plot and sevens and the characters are realistic.

Thank you for writing and for sharing you word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your Reindeer Roulette page looks welcoming, well organized, and is nicely decorated for the holiday event. The idea that you keep secrets is intriguing and a good reason to have a spin or two, or three or more. I hope you have great success when your golden opportunity for prizes is reopened.

Thank you for creating this wonderful opportunity and for sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Review of Man's Best Friend  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jessie-woo woo, is a wonderful dog, thank you for introducing me to her. Your love exudes through your kind and caring words. I feel as if there is more to this story. You mentioned she is your dads dog, tis is important or you wouldn't have written the words. Give her a pat from me. I know about the older dog and have been there many times.

Thank you for writing about Jessie-woo woo, and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Rat Race  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhymed carried me from beginning to the end in a jolly manner. It kept me reading. I could see in my minds eye the mouse running and the cat watching with anticipation of a fresh warm meal when the cat caught the mouse.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
[I and you] also to me means love. I can see the two of you caring and sharing friendship and relationship. I can feel emotions of love, respect, loyalty, and more. The warmth of your words kept me reading

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about love with me and WdC members.


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Review of I AM...  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel peace, love, and endless patience through your words about Jesus. Everything you wrote is wonderful to me. I agree with your words. I appreciate your word art. Safe travels and many blessings.

Thank you for writing about Jesus and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm of your word art kept me interested and reading. I could feel sadness and dismay because of the political circumstances of these times. Your words showed that greed and hard hearts dives politics and cause troubles if people take things for granted and remain spectators.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about political challenges.


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Review of Halloween Horror  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is like a Stephen King halloween story. I figured Jason would get as bloody and gooey as possible and when the lawn mower was started I wasn't sure if he actually killed himself, but I also considered it was a gag and his wife was in on it too. I could see the characters, scenes, and imagine spectators gawking in horror.

Thank you for writing and the gruesome word art and for sharing this halloween story with me and WdC members.


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