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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You wrote many different poems expressing your ideas and experiences which kept me interested in reading. I was not distracted by typos or other issues. Picturing the different things and actions was easy through your carefully chosen words. It was as if I were there with you.

Thank you for writing and sharing you poetry word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Pack  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a very nice homecoming story. I got to know the wolves your main characters well. The scenes and activities are believable although wolves speaking English seems unusual. However, I understand this made the story interesting and moved it along so readers could understand what was happening and get to know the characters better.

Thank you for writing and sharing this wolf story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of RADIO ASTRONOMY  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I recently read about the moon moving away from Earth in very small increments. I wonder if the sun is doing a similar thing or if there are other changes. It would be interesting to learn more about this research.

Thank you for writing and sharing this research information word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Camp Farewell  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Seeing the girls waiting for the test results made me feel like I was waiting. What was happening inside theirsuch as emotions/thoughts, body reactions: tingling, muscles tight, stomach-turning?

When they decided to go camping what was happening: joy, anticipation, were they flexing fingers, shifting from foot to foot, what did this look like?

As actions and reactions showed the story scenes, how did they react to the squirrel, the man, and were they lost or did they return to school?

Your story, scenes, characters, and ideas are believable and realistic. Reading your story was an enjoyable experience and I had no distractions.

There are a few typos.

Thank you for writing and sharing your adventure story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Watching commercials because of a free something or other for entertainment often results in my not wanting anything to do with a company and its products. Commercials are horrible, demeaning, and aggravating nuisances that must be eradicated. Your information is ok, but not of interest to me. You wrote an informative article that I expect is helpful to many people. You got a reaction from me, good going.

Thank you for writing and sharing your explanation about advertising word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pummy's Fate  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The conversation between the pumpkin and Jack-o-lantern is realistic and believable. I could imagine them together conversing about their differences. Your story is easy to read and understand. I found no distractions that would slow fown my reading.

Thank you for writing and sharing your pumpkin word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My mouth watered as I read your poem recipe. I could see you very happy as you gathered the ingredients and mixed them. Further down this wonderful recipe poem, I could taste this wonderful delight.

... a large two or strawberry. What did you mean here?

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC readers, yummy.


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Review of Silky Drawers  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed the parts about [never on the floor] and [I think she loves you more] I had to smile. My imagination got a bit crazy. I could picture your wife and you with the silky drawers between you sleeping. Sometimes unexpected things can get in between a relationship or excite one. Your poem is easy to read, understand, and visualize. It has nice humor, thanks.

Thank you for writing and sharing your silky story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Dark Side of Love  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your words about the dark side of love I could imagine people in relationships dealing with many different unhealthy emotions, and decisions, and using each other as pawns to create heartbreaking relationships. You explained many reasons for relationships and emotions that have a dark side rather than a healthy uplifting side. I can believe these statements because of learning about such relationships through various ways including reading true stories.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Snowflakes  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see you making a snowman in your backyard, the snow falling and creating a blanket, and feeling the cold of winter through your words. Your poem's story is easy to read and understand. It is believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of I’m fine  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
"I'm fine" works well to a degree, but without someplace for rage, anger, or other emotions to have an outlet they can possibly build up causing mental or physical issues. When I've had to deal with volatile emotions I had choices and decided rather than being destructive I would be constructive. I remember a time when I was very angry about an issue and went out to clean a horse stall instead of destroying something. By the time this anger was completely dealt with, I had ome of the cleanest stalls you'd ever want to see and put a horse in. Our response to emotions is up to us and what we decide can be good or bad. I trust God and try to do what Jesus would do.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.
Safe travels and many blessings.


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Review of Questions  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'll get round to it or maybe a square to it, but either way, I might step out of my box or circle one of these days. Yup, I get it. It is good to have questions and seek answers at least so it seems, or is it better to seek and ask questions? I appreciate the nonsense in your words. As I read your words it felt as if I went in one direction and then in another direction which I believe was a part of what you intended to create when you constructed these ideas.

Thank you for writing and sharing your nonsense word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words had me every which way possible as I read your poem. I felt like the people posed differently and in different positions in relation to our usual state on earth. I could feel twirling and turning through your words. It was like a stiff breeze held me as I moved according to your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Randomly Writing  
for entry "The Message" 
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow, she is quite a devious and cunning person when it comes to saving her life. He seems easily distracted, but he should have been more wary of her deceit. Survival of the fittest. One thing for sure hesitating can be deadly. I can believe this story, the characters, and the scene, The characters acted as humans would possibly in this situation. Reading your story is easy and I was not distracted. Your words showed me this interesting tale well.

Thank you for writing and sharing this possibly deadly story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I got excited as I read your words. Editing is a friend I know even though I do not edit as often as I should. I appreciate your reminder to edit. You're right about fluff reviews. They are nice, but I prefer a brutal review so I can continue to learn and grow as a writer. This is the meat and potatoes of writing in my opinion which you showed through words that shine bright this idea. I'm glad you wrote this article and shared it with me and WdC members because it is a great reminder and for people who are starting to write it is a good guide for helping them and any writer thrive and create the best word art possible.

Thank you for your bold and informative word art and for sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It seems to me that you do not do well with change especially when a relationship changes. My friend has trouble with change and doesn't like dealing with it so I have some understanding about your situation. I was able to read your poem without any distractions. The rhythm is smooth and easy to work with during reading. I enjoyed the visuals of the colors you described and was able to imagine the scene.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Flash Prayers  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words of comfort and well wishes for blessings and the things of and from God guided me smoothly through this poem's prayer. As I read your words it felt like a flash prayer because the statements were easy to read, they were rhythmically nice to read, and they were short statements. I understand why you wrote this as a flash prayer because you wanted to share concise information so people understand this kind of prayer.

Thank you for writing this poem prayer word art and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story I thought perhaps the old man was taking his last train ride because of all of the memories and history you revealed. I could see, hear, and feel the events as you described them to me. I got to know about the old man and his family because you brought them alive word by word.

Thank you for writing and sharing your train ride story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You captured my attention with your words which at first seemed to be a bit on the dark side but as you continued your story it got brighter and brighter. You give good advice and I hope more people are encouraged.

Thank you for writing and sharing your encouraging word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I remember the song about the crew and ship. It touched me and caused me to research the information about them and the ship. I discovered the captain was on his last voyage before retiring. She had a seasoned crew who recognized the tell-tale sounds of the storm. I heard the last transmission from the ship before she went down. You wrote a very nice tribute. My attention was not disturbed and I focused on your story.

Thank you for remembering the crew and ship, writing this word art, and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
What did the bear do after it was healed? Did it run away, stay for a while then go, or did it move off and then look back, or look back and snarl? I'm beginning to wonder if much of this story is AI-assisted because the endings are very similar. The story structure is basically the same and many words are the same used to describe what is happening.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story with me and WdC mem bers.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
After tending to the goblins medically, what did the goblins do next? Did they realize the people they attacked were friendly or did they resolve to leave and eventually return to attack at another time and place?

The ending of each chapter is very similar. These endings are very nice, but, making slight changes would keep the readers interested in the next chapter. For example, you could consider someone hearing an unusual noise that would cause mental imagery of something scary, or get them to consider dangers awaiting them as they journey during the next day, or perhaps a dream. By doing this the reader wonders what will happen in the next chapter because of something foretold or perhaps a memory that night come true, or whatever works for the story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Angry  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the heaviness of the relationship as you described it to me. What stuck with me was "You are dismissed" because it felt very heavy as if you had been carrying a huge load for a very long time. I felt your anger within you because you waited so long to end the relationship but, sometimes hope gets the upper hand and it takes a while for reality to sink in. I'm glad you are ok and have moved on. Hopefully, the wounds will or are healed as much as possible.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the relationship with me and WdC members.


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Review of A New Day  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see the bubblegum clouds adorned in pink, the blue sky smooth and airy, and imagine the taste of mint in the winter dawn. The colors you chose for me are relaxing. Nature is relaxing a lot of the time and you brought together a scene that is inviting and very relaxing.

Thank you for writing about nature and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I could see them in the dark, Sanders hovering with his hand clamped to Gibson's mouth. I could feel the frightening situation and imagine the worst. The threat over the apple is believable because things like this are known to happen in jail, but I didn't see the ending coming. I like the idea about Gibson not liking apples. *Laugh*

Thank you for writing and sharing your jail word art story with me and WdC members.


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