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Rated: E | (5.0)
You captured my attention with your words which at first seemed to be a bit on the dark side but as you continued your story it got brighter and brighter. You give good advice and I hope more people are encouraged.

Thank you for writing and sharing your encouraging word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I remember the song about the crew and ship. It touched me and caused me to research the information about them and the ship. I discovered the captain was on his last voyage before retiring. She had a seasoned crew who recognized the tell-tale sounds of the storm. I heard the last transmission from the ship before she went down. You wrote a very nice tribute. My attention was not disturbed and I focused on your story.

Thank you for remembering the crew and ship, writing this word art, and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
What did the bear do after it was healed? Did it run away, stay for a while then go, or did it move off and then look back, or look back and snarl? I'm beginning to wonder if much of this story is AI-assisted because the endings are very similar. The story structure is basically the same and many words are the same used to describe what is happening.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story with me and WdC mem bers.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
After tending to the goblins medically, what did the goblins do next? Did they realize the people they attacked were friendly or did they resolve to leave and eventually return to attack at another time and place?

The ending of each chapter is very similar. These endings are very nice, but, making slight changes would keep the readers interested in the next chapter. For example, you could consider someone hearing an unusual noise that would cause mental imagery of something scary, or get them to consider dangers awaiting them as they journey during the next day, or perhaps a dream. By doing this the reader wonders what will happen in the next chapter because of something foretold or perhaps a memory that night come true, or whatever works for the story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Angry  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the heaviness of the relationship as you described it to me. What stuck with me was "You are dismissed" because it felt very heavy as if you had been carrying a huge load for a very long time. I felt your anger within you because you waited so long to end the relationship but, sometimes hope gets the upper hand and it takes a while for reality to sink in. I'm glad you are ok and have moved on. Hopefully, the wounds will or are healed as much as possible.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the relationship with me and WdC members.


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Review of A New Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see the bubblegum clouds adorned in pink, the blue sky smooth and airy, and imagine the taste of mint in the winter dawn. The colors you chose for me are relaxing. Nature is relaxing a lot of the time and you brought together a scene that is inviting and very relaxing.

Thank you for writing about nature and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I could see them in the dark, Sanders hovering with his hand clamped to Gibson's mouth. I could feel the frightening situation and imagine the worst. The threat over the apple is believable because things like this are known to happen in jail, but I didn't see the ending coming. I like the idea about Gibson not liking apples. *Laugh*

Thank you for writing and sharing your jail word art story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sometimes it takes making a decision to change things, but sometimes working through the process to get to the decision is more important. Your words showed me how Seven worked through his thoughts to decide to talk with his parents.

Thank you for writing your decision story word art and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Review of Together Forever  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem it felt like there was a great distance between two people before you mentioned war. It seemed there was great love and respect in the relationship. Sadly war got in between the relationship and even though there was distance between you there is a longing for the other to remember you. Your words showed me images and feelings of a wonderful relationship driven apart by war.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Training Camp  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ace and Luna seem to be kindred spirits who are well-matched for their adventure. You showed the scenes, characters, and actions so I could visualize your story like watching a movie in my head. I wonder what some of their actions looked like. for example, did Luna jump, grab Ace's arm, or do something else because of her fear of the creature? what inside emotions did they have and what was happening such as blood coursing rapidly?

Thank you for writing and sharing your wilderness story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of My Little Voice  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words tell a story of abuse, romance, and hiding in a corner which I suppose is like hiding from reality. The word flow is smooth and there are no distractions. I was able to focus on the story and was glad to know that the small voice survived. I hope things are much better now. I can imagine the terror of the situation and not knowing what to do.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the frightening emotions of experiencing the unknown increase as I read your poem. The sound of something spooky emitting in the dark added to this experience. I could hear and imagine the terrors of the night which made me want to hide from something unseen. Your poem is believable and the scenes are realistic.

Thank you for writing and sharing your spooky poem with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
These people have great respect for themselves and their friendships because they do not overpower each other. I could imagine the dragons flying, resting, and watching over the people. The actions of the people are easy to imagine and I could see the scenes clearly in my mind. This story, characters, and scenes are believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Facebook Photos  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your story is believable because some people want revenge, they do not consider a better alternative. I could see the student at the computer digging up the information. The teacher is believable because people like to relax and have fun after a hard day's work. The scenes are realistic and easy to imagine.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I know that being modest is a good thing, especially because flaunting oneself can lead to trouble. It is not a good idea to seduce someone. A marriage is best when is of respect for each other. In your words, you showed this to be the best choice.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can imagine hands on the bible and swearing an oath while telling a falsehood with a smile. I can hope that politics is purged of lies, but humans tend to do whatever it takes to get what they want when they have no respect for God and scripture. You showed politics as it has been for a long time. I hope things change for the better. I was able to imagine the scenes, characters, and events.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about politics with me and WdC members.


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Review of Never Tell  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Trust is broken by the person you would expect to keep this trust. A family member betraying trust by murdering a sibling. It reminds me of Cane and Able when jealousy caused the first murder. Sometimes even trusting family can be dangerous. You wrote a believable story with characters who act normally and a scene that is a good fit for this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The characters had an adventure they didn't expect because nature changed the environment. I was surprised someone didn't try to prank someone else by hiding their clothes which is the way similar stories have gone in the plot. Your story, characters, and scene are believable. I could imagine the details.

Thank you for writing and sharing this story word art adventure with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words reminded me of stories or events as I read your poem, but I switched to considering emotions and the inner drive of humanity. Both of these can work together to tell a story be it true or fiction, yet it can also show a writer battling as the words come slowly and with much effort.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdCX members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As you write about the dismal loneliness of Tess and then show her longing for someone I could see the scene and Tess waiting for someone. Feeling through your words her longing turned to fright, then as she follows the person she gets her kiss and a wedding and a future with her special person makes the scene warm and cozy with the feeling of peace.

Thank you for writing and sharing this poem love story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This must have been a very funny situation at least as I visualize it is very funny. I did notice issues with proper punctuation. There are typos that distract me from reading this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about the rat stuck in the Coke bottle.


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Review of The Ballroom  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Away in a corner alone even with a beautiful smile in sight is something I pictured as I read and wondered what prevented a natural reaction to get to know the girl. There must have been doubt and disbelief that meeting and getting to know someone is possible. It occurred to me that perhaps a spirit may have interfered with the potential relationship. Your story is believable because the characters are believable along with the circumstances.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story with me and WdC members.


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Review of No language  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In your poem, it seems that there is a language problem or medical issue preventing the little girl from talking. I suspect there is too much input and pressure causing her to want to disappear even though she longs to communicate. I could visualize people surrounding her and talking. I could feel her mentally shrinking away.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art about the girl who has much to say and isn't able to communicate.


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Review of The Mural  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That must have been a fantastic mural according to what I know of this story. I remember a similar story where the children did the painting. It is possibly something in a movie or TV show years ago. Your plot, characters, scene, and dialogue are realistic and believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your artistic story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yes the energy, I'm very glad you mentioned the energy because of the importance of realizing how important it is to understand about the energy. Your story, characters, scenes, and events are believable because people behave similarly to strange and unexpected situations.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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