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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem the words rhythmically carried me through this story of long-lost love. I felt the longing for the distance to be closed and for the touch. I could see the sky and sea far apart and hands reaching upward.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about love with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
The cards remind me of pictures of past and future things. Visualizing the actions of manipulating the cards is easy for me as I read your words. Your story is easy to follow and understand. The words made sounds that worked well together as in a musical arrangement.

Thank you for writing your card story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
These are very wonderful and deep words to be respected and pondered because befriending God means having a thorough, complete, and regular relationship. Spending as much time with Him each day as humanly possible. My heart jumped with Joy when I read your words. My spirit embraced the words of wisdom you wrote. I can see this only in this way.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about a relationship with God with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your creative idea about being in line with God and His plans by using the idea of tuning in to His radio program is music to my ears. People can most likely relate to your message because you used something familiar. Many times people listen to music and other stuff but don't realize they can listen to what God has for them.

Thank you for writing about tuning in to God and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of THE ICON  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story I could visualize these events. I could feel the challenges as if they were happening to me, and relate because although I wasn't a child when I lost my parents I have had this experience. The unknown can be a heavy burden which I also have experienced and hope has been lightened for you. You gave me a closeup and personal view of your life and how it affected you. I got to know you and your family.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Reminiscences  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed the funny parts about the monkeys. Thank you very much for the laughter. Your poem as I read it had a bouncy and happy rhythm to it. The tone seemed to be light-hearted. It was as if the dinosaur also was happy. Your words worked well together showing me a wonderful view of this story.

Thank you for writing this poem about the dinosaur and sharing your word art with me and wdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I smiled when I read The "one" creator. It made my heart sing with joy. Your poem seemed to start not in black but mostly in grey. As it became lighter colors began to shine.You took it from the human view point and turned it toward the creator. It shines very brightly because of the creator in your words.

Thank you for writing words to give pause for thought and sharing your word art that shines the creator with me and WdC members.


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Review of " Can't Rush "  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words brought in my mind scenes of Gods hands holding the universe together and doing great works. I felt a peacefulness as I read your word art.

Thank you very much for sharing your word art about God with me and WdC members. I'm glad you are writing and glorifying God through your words.


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Review of Perspective  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Your plot, characters, and scene are believable because you made the martians seem like ordinary folk in speech, actions, and environment. The wonder of the martian boy is evident. Some details that would show the hesitancy of the father you had to leave out because of word limits, but should you choose, explaining how he moved, his inward emotions, and how the boy had to respond to his dad would bring out more interesting information for this story.

Thank you for writing about Martians seeing a US UFO and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your words caused me to shudder. I could feel the tug-of-war, see the actions of ripping and tearing to sunders, hear the anguish uttered, and hope that salvation would prevail. Sadly it seems fire rages and ashes are all that's left. Because I have not been in this situation, I can only understand it from the description of your words.

I believe God is ultimately in control and that He can do anything. He has taken care of me all of my life. I have received many blessings. I know scripture tells that God loves us and sent Jesus to show the way to salvation.

Safe travels and many blessings.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Bad Luck  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Bad luck indeed to be wiped out completely. I could imagine the scenes which reminded me of different battlefield scenes in movies. The speech, actions, characters ,scenes, plot are believable.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your battlefield word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of AKIN  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words describe a scene of the unknown. A character who is perhaps misshapen, but I feel this character is an image created in the mind with its unstable shape. Or, perhaps it is the other side of a person who is generally good at heart, yet has the other side occasionally appearing in dream like fashion reminding the person about the darker side of life and death.

We have our good side and our bad side. I believe in Gods abilities to take care of everything. I trust Him because He has taken care of me all of my life. For this reason I can also see through your words that both sides battle and the good wins.

Thank you for writing about both sides of life and death battling for supremacy with good winning praise and glory to God. Thank you for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A twist on the hunger games that brought images of this story to life with added relational changes. I could see the scenes in my minds eye, hear the conversations, feel the tension and other emotions, and believe these changes and additions.

Thank you for writing this hunger games story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very up close and vivid introduction to two special horses that I can see, touch, and appreciate through your carefully chosen words. Years ago I had horses. A stallion, several mares, one, a quarter horse. I remembered them as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing about these special horses and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Bad Girl  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
well Sue was certainly naughty, but...you joined in her naughtiness so is like the pot calling the kettle black. Guilty as charged, lol. I could see because of your carefully chosen words the scene, the characters, the actions, and feel a lot of emotion. You made this scene and the characters realistic and I could believe something like this happening.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about naughty Sue and you with me and WdC members. It seems there were two college degrees acquired, lol.


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Review of Trust in the Lord  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You touched my heart with your words because through your confession I felt God. I know there are times when I have blundered ahead of God and made a huge mess. Thank you for reminding me and for showing people the necessities of prayer and trusting God as you wait for Him.

Thank you for writing these words an sharing them with me and WdC members.


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Review of Who is Happy ??  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Praise and glory to God because I am content and happy. I could feel the happiness of each bird until that bird saw another bird they thought was prettier or better in some way. It is true about humans comparing but we are told not to do this according to scripture and other writings. I'm glad you explained this concept in an interesting, colorful, and believable story. I was able to see, feel, and understand all of it from the beginning to the end.

There are some typos/errors. Reading this story and making minor changes will smooth out the wording and de less distracting to readers.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about not comparing with me and WdC members.


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Review of Dearest Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm encouraged by your words. Rooting for you is magnetic. Feeling your encouragement is uplifting to me. Word by word you wrote a poetic dear me message that is alive and speaks to me as if you were sharing your ides with me face to face.

I could imagine each scene with you standing or sitting beside you, a hand on the shoulder of you, and giving a pep talk.

I hope you are having a fantastic 2024.

Thank you very much for the pep talk. Yup, it is a pep take to me. I am encouraged.

Thank you for writing and sharing your dear me word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Beautiful Rain  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I could feel the scary part of this situation. I could imagine being stalked. I could run but not hide. The idea of an unperceived change is frightening. All this combines to make me want to avoid you at all times. I thought about Halloween while writing this review.

Thank you for writing and sharing your changeable self through word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
{But, when it came to the moon}brought a smile to my face. I didn't know why until I finished reading your word art. What you wrote about poetry is true and so it also applies with any writing. I could see you dealing with the challenge of not writing poetry, but I could also imagine you writing a story in a poetic way. Finding the right words to express the feelings, scenes, characters, and other things in a story matter as much as words for poetry. I can imagine you and words dancing across the page or screen creating a story in poetry form or poetry in short story form.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Inner Me  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I really appreciate these words because I now have a better idea about how you see and respond to the world. It also gives me the opportunity to know you better and to be able to create a friendship that I hope will last. I can relate because I also miss visual cues similar to you missing audible cues.

You are an individual. Aspergers is also variable. Together I understand it is a challenge to explain to people what things are like for people living with Aspergers. You can explain your situation but I won't completely understand because I'm not you. I can only have a clue.

Please help me to understand one step at a time as our relationship grows.

Your words show insights into this special situation. You have talents that most people won't have because of you unique pop.

I applaud you for not quitting and continuing to climb the mountain of life because I had difficulties with school stuff and socializing for different reasons.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree with you because blindly following whatever others dictate is not always the best choice. Ir is plain in your words that following the spirit, researching the situation, and taking time to think things through before deciding on a way to proceed should be done first. You also make it clear that by blindly based on how many or past history following can lead to destruction. I could imagine and feel the turmoil of being bullied and fighting to over come by deciding for yourself what the best course of action would be.

Thank you for writing and for sharing you insights and word art with me an WdC members.


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Review of Clash  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the additional information available below the poem because it helps readers have a better understanding your word art. I could see and feel the tug-of-war between trusting your heart or your mind. I wonder what the spirit has to offer ni this situation.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC embers.


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Review of Believer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You did a nice job working with the digital art software. The colors you choose blend well making this picture interesting visually. I could feel the peace of the dove and also the burning of compassion.

Thank you for writing about this picture and sharing your words and picture with me and WdC members.
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Review of Summer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for explaining the picture and the steps you took to create it. I did not know she was holding a dragon because it blend in well. I have limited vision; blind in one eye and legally blind in the other. The colors work well together and do not take over in one aspect oner others. They are to me relaxing.

Thank you for writing about your art work and sharing it with WdC members.
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