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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for the poetry lesson. Because you wrote this poem showing the development of a tsunami I learned about this poetry type. I also was able to see the tsunami as is was born, grew, and became mature.

Thank you for writing and sharing your tsunami word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree with you. Many people have no idea how our representatives are elected, how they vote, and many have too much kool-aid in their system, or have been brainwashed. We need to watch for tinkering and dishonesty. You made a simple explanation of how things work stated in an inviting way for readers to learn about this and understand the what, why, when and how of our electoral process. I hope people wakeup and see what is happening and understand how they can make changes.

Thank you for sharing this information with me and WdC members.


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Review of Moonrise  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could hear the howling of the wolves as I read your poem. The lake mirror, the Goddess, and wilderness scene is vivid through your word art.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the goddess and nature with me and WdC members.


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Review of Misty  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Your story showed me characters who although have a nice conversation, are unknown. I wonder about their body language, facial expressions, and if they continue their acquaintance relationship?

The story about how Things went with the girls relationship after a few years?

Restructuring the sentences using pastéense for history and affection words showing noe as in the present would help the story move smoother and be more realistic. For example: she grabbed a lighter and remembers the first time a lighter was in her hand. It was smooth, comfortable, and she slid her thumb toward the lever as her nerves tingled with anticipation. Her mouth salivated and formed an 0 shape as the cigarette slipped between her lips.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The voice could have been for safety or evil but I'm glad it turned out to be a test. I have had promptings from the Holy Ghost like a feeling, voice in my head, or a combination that saved me from trouble. I can imagine the fear of the unknown rippling through the character. The character and story are believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about a voice with me and WdC members.


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Review of Blazes in the Sky  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome dedication to the unborn children because of the brightness of he burning candle which shows the brightness of the children with God.

When I read about her realizing about his flame not dying it seemed to be like going over a bump. For me it would read more smoothly and be more enjoyable if you took out the word [had]

Thank you for writing this wonderful poem and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of RAINDROP PRELUDE  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your carefully placed and chosen words I could see a pianist tickling the keys, first moving to the left. Deep into the lower tones of the strings and then moving to the right. Tickling the notes of the higher strings. The lower strings a bit out of tune and the higher strings in tune and singing a cheerful sone because the heart is full of joy and gladness.

Years ago I tuned and repaired pianos. I can relate to the ups and down of the keyboard.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of True to his Word  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! The rage hit me like a wave from the ocean. I could see the scene which showed emotions of rage and disappointment from dad toward the son who did continue playing music. I get it. Music is in the blood. It stays for life as long as life on earth exists. I could see the trepidation of everyone else too. I can believe a story about someone who loves something and is forbidden to enjoy it.

Thank you for sharing your emotional word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of TIME  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can see through your words time passing as things are changing and changing as time is passing. You're right, time waits for no one and still it allows us to change and grow. Your words guided me through your story creating no distractions.

Thank you for writing about time and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of MEMORIES  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the joy of the adventures, the sadness of illness, and the deeper sadness of your loss. I've been there done that many times and know it doesn't get easier. I could also relate this to human to human relationship because animals are family members and because often we have similar friendships. I believe animals and people especially loved pets are many for each other.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your special friend with me and WdC members.


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Review of Bathtub Dilemma  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the ride from beginning to end as the bouncy rhythm guided along the road of mirth. Thank you for the chuckles I enjoyed this story. This is a believable dilemma. I could see the tug of war between going to bed and relaxing in a tub of warm soothing water. I thought about doing both and sure enough you wrote about it. fortunately no drowning was allowed and this story ended happily.

Thank you for writing and sharing this great story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I liked the story because it showed kindness toward strangers. This adventure is believable as written. The characters are realistic and the scenes also. One thing I took from this story is that when the grass seems greener on the other side, it may not be as green as supposed. I'm glad Edward was able to retune home safely.

Thank you for writing and sharing this Halloween story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Just A Dusting...  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I chuckled at the last statement about a frozen seat, thanks. For me the bouncy rhythm worked well, at least this is how I read your poem. The weather, you chilled in your car, and all the rest are best pictures I could inject. It is a scrumptious story which I could see and feel.I was a part of this adventure.

Thank you for writing this story and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Singing Angels  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see and hear the birds as they visited with you Your words were like a melody inviting me into this special communion of friendship. It felt as if you were sharing this precious gift with me by writing about the birds singing in the trees.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poetry story about your bird friends with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the way your words worked together to move me from the beginning to the end of your poem because I felt like God was reading with me and sharing His wisdom. I agree with the idea that we are not in charge, He is. We do not completely understand from His level of understanding. I trust God. I believe He has my best interest at heart and cares for me always. I could feel and see these things in your words.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Jewel Thief  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You had me laughing my way through your poetry story. My imagination created funny caricatures and scenes as I read your word art. I could believe the story and the characters are realistic because it is told that truth is stranger than fiction, and humans do some strange and funny things. The chimney exit is great. I can see Earl going up the chimney like a vacuum sucked him through it and he flew away6 to parts unknown.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the jewel thief with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought about "What would Jesus do?" as I read your inspiring poem. The words gave me insight into people and nature as God has made them. He is the creator and as such we all humanity are precious in His sight. Therefore we should take care of each other. I could imagine Jesus showing the way even though He lived a life of homelessness He cared for us. We should follow His example.

Thank you for writing this wonderful poem and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I don't know anything about these cards. I'm not sure I want to know. This is a spooky Stephen King kind of story. I had no trouble imagining the scene, and characters, and felt the confusion. Adding emotions such as body language will bring your story to life in a more intriguing way. How did they feel and react to this situation? For example, what does shivering look like? Shaking and trembling as chills ran all over his body. The plot is a realistic possibility.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
During my search, I hoped I would not groan.
What's next?


What is found? Is it a beautiful array of colors? How did the character feel when they found these flowers and shrubs and trees decked with beautiful blossoms, berries, and painted leaves? Was spring early or was it late? Did it last longer than usual?

I hope you finish this poem because it shows spring on its way and the anticipation of flowers as a bouquet waiting for people to enjoy.

Thank you for writing about spring and colors and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of To The Sea  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see in my imagination the different changes and yet these changes are regular and stable because they happen in cycles. We see it over and over again and expect it will not change. Yet this stability changes in an ordered fashion. Your words showed this vividly.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand your point of view. In many ways, I also have done what you wrote about. Whenever possible I rescue insects. Eating meat no matter the source I try to do it in moderation. Do you know that plants are similar? Scientifically they have a social system. Plants also are community species.

Whenever posible I help animals as much as possible. I feel bad when an animal dies because people think they are disposable. Insects are precious and I once had a pet tarantula. I've also had for short periods several other species of bugs and insects so I could observe them. Before the end of summer, I would let them go and was thankful for knowing them.

I appreciate your word art which gave me further insight into the world of bugs and insects. It also helped me to get to know you.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Two islands  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could picture the scenes and feel the longing for peaceful quiet. I get it because I am blessed with ten plus acres where it is quiet and peaceful.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about finding peaceful quiet through your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I thought about being thankful for this experience because you know first-hand and can help other people who will be faced with this kind of challenge. Experience is a good teacher and you can share your knowledge. I also want to pass on: You learned from this mistake. You are the expert. When you were weak in that moment it became a strength later.

Thank you for sharing your word art about strength vs weakness and sharing it with me and WdC members. This is a testimony to your strength and ability to learn from your experiences, you are awesome! God is good for helping you.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I learned more than I knew about Jane Austin because I read this newsletter. Now I'm curious about what she wrote and hope to explore some of her writing. You presented the facts in a relaxed and honorable manner about Jane Austin. I feel as if I've met her.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about Jane Austin with me and WdC members.


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Review of End of Days  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Seeing hands holding with love and compassion is wonderful view of two people who care for and love each other. Your words gently showed me the ash for following this story. It made me want to continue reading. I'm glad your poem was found through [read and review].

Thank you for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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